Comments on: Nang i ngawih tlat si chuan…!!

By: Kawnga

Kawnga — Fri, 18 Jun 2010 16:16:06 +0000

@Pu Shai, i ngaihdan hi ka tawmpui che. Hlaphuah lam kher hi zawng ka englo thenna lam hi a ni lo. An rawn ti sup sup a, ka phur ve thut a nih mai hi. Min comment sak a, ka lawm e.

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By: shailendra

shailendra — Tue, 15 Jun 2010 05:51:34 +0000

@Kawnga, a tha reng. Ka ti mai mai a, Mizo hoin saptawng kan thiam tak tak hma a kan hla phuah (hla ril/hla um/poetry based) ho flow nei tha tak tak kha, tuna saptawng kan thiam tak hnu a hla kan han phuah hian, kan vaw dal ta mai mai lo maw?

Tunhma kha chuan hlathu tawp a rhyme system etc etc kha kan ngaihtuah ngai lo a. Kan hla phuah ho kha flow tha takin a kal tho a. Entirnan, Chai hla, Puma zai, German ral run etc. Tuna thangthar in western assimilated zawng a hla kan han phuah chhoh takah hian, a rhyme leh i vel hi kan dah san tak luatah, a hla flow hi a ulh duh ta deuh in ka hria. Sap in rhyme system etc etc annei a, chu chu lakluh ve kher hi kan tih tur a ni ber em?

Kawnga, lo haw lo la, i rhyme words hi kan thiat chhin-
Dawnin a na,thlafam ngaih zawng
A hrang mang e, awmlai lian hi
Pawm lai ka then, thlunglu a hai ngei e.

Hnutiang kir zai, reng rel lovin
Nuamin an leng, van khaw mawian
Eng dawn lovin, min ngai ve maw…

Mizo style-ah chuan, a hla thu tawp ah rhymes intlarthla diat lo mahse, ka rilruah chuan a mar zaih zawk…

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By: Kawnga

Kawnga — Mon, 14 Jun 2010 08:09:10 +0000

Ka thiannu a pasalin a boralsan tawh tan hman deuhah khan ti hian ka lo thai chhin ve a…

Dawnin a na, thlafam ngaih hi
A hrang mange, awmlai lian hi
Pawm lai ka then, thlunglu a hai

Hnutiang kir zai, reng rel lovin
Nuamin an leng, van khua mawiin
Eng dawn lovin, min ngai siin

A tlar bul ngaihtuah tel ka duh bawk sia, a ulh khawp mai..

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By: Far_Star

Far_Star — Sun, 13 Jun 2010 13:27:08 +0000

Ka’n ti ve chhin : (Light Verse)
“Ami tawnah i ti phut a
Nang ngaiin ka tlu khut a
Chhawrthlapui lah kal boh boh
Nang ngaiin ka pen koh koh

Theih chang se mi u
Heti’n ka ko ang che “Ka u”
A mak a maka nasain
Ka duh si ta che, nuihzatthlakin”

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By: ZerO

ZerO — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 22:06:26 +0000

A va ngawi rei ve a….

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By: Killer shark

Killer shark — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 21:26:32 +0000

Rim thluk tur zawng ve nghal ang. :lol:

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By: kawlhawk

kawlhawk — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 17:30:28 +0000

E khai! Komen i va turu hlawm ve! He Hla/ Thu hi nizan Ualkap inkhel karlakah hmanhmawh angreng taka ka tih chûk2 a nia, a phuailuaiin thu-elh tak2 pawh a awm ngei ang. Chuti chunga tha/mawi/ril ti a min fakdertute chungah ka lawm a, a tha lo lai leh fuh lo lai seltute chungah pawh ka lawm em em a ni. Inhnung zuiin kan han ti ve chhet2 a ni ber a, lehpekah chuan a ‘turu’ tawh ngawt ang! :smile:

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By: shailendra

shailendra — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 16:55:41 +0000

@caribou, kawlhawk rawn inlar hun ka huphurh khawp mai. A hla nilo lam hlirin ka lo pau pui ta vak ta si a… :lol:

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By: caribou

caribou — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 16:28:40 +0000

Shailendra chu leh. Hla phuah i va thiam ve. “I pau tam si…aw i pau tam si”.

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By: T_taichiata

T_taichiata — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 15:03:22 +0000

a va tha thlawt ve…ka thinlung ram chul toh hnu..chawlawl toh hnu..tha thar mi pe tlaat mai…ka tho anga ka kal dawn..tha thar nen..a tlu toh hrim hrim!!!!!!!!!!

bei nge seirundung an ti mi kha..ka aply a..ka tar zo dawn…apply chi loh..tun atang cuan..ill shoot down every young girls i foung t mi kha…ka ti toh don..

a tha khop mai..

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