Comments on: Ka Hêl Bîk Lo’ng Che

By: triplestar

triplestar — Tue, 26 Apr 2011 08:33:50 +0000

@muantea, a lo nih khi, a end rhyme khi ka lo en miah lo a-b a-b

Ka inhnuk dawk leh e

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By: muantea

muantea — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 15:46:38 +0000

@triplestar, i sawi ang khian ziak se a rhymme scheme a buai vek dawn asin

Tluangrhymme-a hi i phuah tha thei khawp mai, han ti zel teh.Sonnet type-in i ziak thin bawk sia, a chang then lo khian sonnet kalphung angin rawn rem thin la a tha lehzual ang.

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By: triplestar

triplestar — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 15:22:29 +0000

Ka thil type teh nuaih chu, ka edit thei miah lo lehnghal, ka hmanhmawh lutuk a lawm mawle

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By: triplestar

triplestar — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 15:19:34 +0000

‘Tleitir hmeltha, engtin min ngâi ang che?’
tih aiah hian ‘Tleitir hmeltha, engtin min ngâi che maw?’ han ti hanp ta mai la, nagaihno a bei deuh zawng law’ng maw aw te ka lo ti mai mai a..

A ni tak a sin, tleirawl/rawlthar lai kha chuan kan hmuh chak em em te pawh kha kan han hmuh chiah khan kan lai leh trut thin a, han awm fal ila sawi tur reng reng kan hre leh si lo thin anih kha maw

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