Comments on: Hun Hlui – Hun Thar

By: Tluanga

Tluanga — Sat, 04 Jun 2011 10:16:37 +0000

Ka lo thlir reng thin a, tunah chuan ka hmu ta.

Thenkhat chuan hla hi phuah dan/ kalhmang bik nei hi an hrethiamlo mai pawh ni lovin, tul an ti lo thin. Mahse, hei tak hi hla ropuina leh a phuahtu themthiamzia phochhuahna a ni a; ngaihtuahnain riltin a hrut loh chuan phuah mai mai theih a ni lo tih a tarlang bawk.

Ka chhiar a, ka chhiar nawn leh a, ka chhiar leh zel a. He hla a lo awm theihna tura a phuahtu thluak hman nasat turzia ka hmu bawk a.

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By: shailendra

shailendra — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 16:57:53 +0000

‘riltin’ tih khi ka duh luttuk. Tunhnaia tawng hmang thar siam chawp, computer term atana hman tur “mouse’ tih lehlinna tih vel ai hian a adopatable luttuk, riltin tih tawngkam khian ka ril a fan…

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By: muantea

muantea — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 15:14:12 +0000

Thiante u, min lo hrethiam teh u. Vawiin ka hna lamah ni tla van vuuiin ka buai a, ka online hman ngang lo a ni. Iambic Tetrameter hmanga ka hlahril phuah hmasak ber a ni a, fuh tawk lo chu a awm e.

‘riltin’ tih lai khi ka phuah hun lai ka ngaihtuah letin ‘kiltin’ tih ka tum a, mahse a huam zau tawk lovin ka hria a, thinglung chhungril ber hrut vek tur ka duh avangin ‘riltin’ duh takin ka ti ta mai a ni.

@kawlhawk, hun leh nun hi inunau hnai tak kal dun rial a nih avangin ‘a tha vek e’ ka ti mai.

@lianchhiara,i mit a varin hlahril lamah chuan i benghawng hle tih a hriat e. I han tarlan lai tlar khatna pair 3-na leh 4-na khi a meter lamah chuan dik mahse a flow a letling roh a, ka duh sia, ka ti ta mai Amaherawhchu, tlar 4-na i sawi khi chu han siam danglam dan tur ka hre lovin a dikhlelna lai ka hmu thiam mai lo tlat, min han hrilh zawk teh.

Thu, hlaa chantira kalphung zawm tura phuah chhuah hi lung a len lem loh phei chuan ralpui phiara phiar a ngai deuh roh tlat thin

In comment ho hian min tilawm khawp mai.

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By: Amaria.vch

Amaria.vch — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 10:26:03 +0000

Mizo trawnga poetry phuah hi thil har tak a nia, ka tum ve nasa tawh alawm, a thui mawh teh asin aw. Mizo trawng hi a la hausa tawk lo a ni tih ka pawm phah thlap. A post tupa pawh hian hetiang taka dek nalh leh ril tur hi chuan a chai ve nasa khawpin ka ring e.

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By: lianchhiara

lianchhiara — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 10:01:35 +0000

@a post tupa, a meter i ngaipawimawh ta sa sa, a pair khatna chauh khi sawi ila – tlar khatna chiah khi siamthat ngai a ni awm e. Tlar khatna tih loh khi chu pair khatna khi unstress/stress a ni deuh vek a, tlar khatna tê khian a hmai a tibal.

Pair hnih zawha comma dah zel hi Iambic Tetrameter ziarang a nih chuan ka hre law, chutiang a nih loh chuan comma dahna thenkhat (eg. Eng dawn lova, tlaini len lai.) ah khi chuan dah loh a mawi zawkin ka ring ve ringawt. Tin, Mizo tawng kalphung ngaihtuah chik zawka chhiar chuan, tlar 4-na, pair tawp pahnih khi chu siamthat a chakawm ngawtin ka ring bawk.

I thiamzia a lang a, ka theih ve loh thil a ni tih pawh ka hai lo. Midangin an fak tho che a, kei chuan heti lam hi ka rawn ziak ve mai mai a ni e. NOI

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By: Rumtea

Rumtea — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 09:38:56 +0000

Pawnlang takin a ril

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By: kawlhawk

kawlhawk — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 09:05:35 +0000

A thupui khi “Hun hlui – Nun thar” tih ni zawk se, a mawiin a fuh zawk ang em awww…???

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By: smokester

smokester — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 08:04:49 +0000

a va ril em

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By: TuaiSialA

TuaiSialA — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:48:14 +0000

Khi hla khi rhyme scheme nei thlapin han ti la chu, a nalh lehzual ngei ang. Chhiar a nuamin hlathu un lutuk ang chi a awm lem lova, mi mawl ber tan pawh hriatthiam theih chi a ni. I sonnet ka lo nghak reng e!

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By: Dr Mahminga Sailo

Dr Mahminga Sailo — Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:19:38 +0000

Sir Muantea’n English min zirtir lai (class xi & xii) kha chuan ka tui ve thin a nia. Mahse, Ui leh a kaihhnawih ngawt mai zir a, ka buaipui tak hnu ah hian, ka hriat ve ho pawh ka hloh then ta Ballad te kha ka ziak ve thin asin le

# 14… chhunzawmna ka lo nghak e, a tawi na’ngin a ril tlat

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