Comments on: PAMHMAI

By: H.Vangchhia

H.Vangchhia — Thu, 17 May 2012 12:44:06 +0000

Sap tawngin tihian anlo tih thin kha!

The freedom to not-rhyme must include the freedom to rhyme. Then verse will be “free.” All rhymed poetry must be rhyme-driven. This is no longer considered pejorative.

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By: Awmtea Khiangte

Awmtea Khiangte — Thu, 17 May 2012 08:01:34 +0000

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By: Bble

Bble — Thu, 17 May 2012 05:47:35 +0000

<—– voin ni taka damlai lusun.. nui2 (za lo takin)

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By: EmEich

EmEich — Thu, 17 May 2012 02:22:00 +0000

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By: saint sammoo

saint sammoo — Thu, 17 May 2012 01:04:18 +0000

… Of the east atang hian kan tho 1st ang e.! Thlarau pawlna chan laia ziah chhuah bawrh bawrh, chul mam lem loh a ang. poetry chu a ri lo (hmmm..hmm,hmmm…) ti a chhiar pawn a mawi tur a ni..hnam dang pawn ngaithla se a mawi an ti tur a ni… an ti thin, a thu ni lovin a rik/thluk dan (tone leh flow), a ri (ri sang, hniam, khamphei..) leh rhyme hi a pawimawh hmasa ber in ka hria. Sylable nen. Chu mi chhungah chuan a thu leh kan sawi tum chu remkhawm i la, a fuh tlang pui. Blank leh free verse ringawt phuah lovin mithiam hmasa ten form fel tak, eg. Sonnet, quarted..ldt. an neih sa ho hi zui thin ila, hmasawn a awl.

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By: Master Kim

Master Kim — Wed, 16 May 2012 19:29:12 +0000

Kei zawng ka dawn ngam lo. Ihih.hih.hih. Lung akuai emai. Min hriatchhuah tir i nei. Mahse ….sawi dawn lo rengs. Ka thin a rim leh ang. Hei ila hmutai viau mai sia i iai lawi bawk sia. Han chawi vul leh te tea a vullai taka han thliah hnap tur che nia. Duh leh i iai ta viau a nih leh kawngsirah te nisa em vuai turin i hnutchhiah tawh mai anga. Phuba ni mai.

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By: khirhkhak

khirhkhak — Wed, 16 May 2012 18:35:37 +0000

A va han ril ruih ruih ve le, a phuahtu rilru a tang lo chuan hriatthiam kim pawh a harsa hle mai ‘Dai theu loha sahrang hliam hnu’ tih ang te hi.

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By: Thahminga

Thahminga — Wed, 16 May 2012 18:29:41 +0000

A thu then khat mawi tih ak tak ka nei, amaherawhchu, a un lutuk nge ka man kim zo ve hauh lo mai … ka hriatthiam chin chu tha ka van ti em..

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By: Sasaks

Sasaks — Wed, 16 May 2012 18:28:42 +0000

#7 @Vakul – A nui mawi ka tia, a nuih khan amah kha mawi ka ti bawk, ‘ti khian ka ti ta mai! Lawl….

A rei tawh em a, attachment awm tawh lo, detached point of view atangin ka thlir a, a literary value te ka en ta mah mah zawk kei a ziaktu pawh hian! Ka phuah zan khan mi(sual) ho hi rawn hlui che u ila chu…ka luangliam mai ni lovin ka dir zawih zawih ang a hunlai chuan ‘tiang hi…a nuam miah lo!

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By: vakul

vakul — Wed, 16 May 2012 18:02:13 +0000

nui mawi nge nuih mawi…

i rilru pawh a insual tih a hriat. hmangaihna la cham si mahse ramri kham miah lova sahrangin a lo suasam tawh han kherawlai leh tur chuan iai ve luklak bawk si….i dinhmun tur chu sheldon hian a man thiam khawp ang ti ribgawt ila.

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