I TEL LO CHUAN
- Mickey Hlondo
Nang nena kan intawn hi ka ring ngai lo;
Pawl sawm ka exam dawn dawnah kan intawng!
Zep thu cheng suh, a tir kha chuan ka ning thei lutuk che!
Mahse, i tello chuan ka hringnun hi a kim si lo;
Tun thleng pawh hian a ruk tak chuan ka la ning che asin!
Mahse, i tello chuan mi pangngai lo ka ni ta mai si…
Hmangaih biahthu min hlan duh lo a,
Kei pawhin ka hlan bik dawn lo che!
Nula dang han hrilhruk sar sar ka tum ve te pawh hian
I lo inrawlh ve zel a… Ka ning bawn phirs che!
Ning ru viau che mahila i tello chuan ka awm thei tawh bawk si lo…
He planet-ah hian Simeikhu angin hringfate hi kan lo lang ve zawk a,
Kei, Mickey Zohmingliana ngei pawh hi,
Eng tikah emaw chuan he khawvel atang hian
ka la herliam ve ngei ang
Chumi hma zawng chu duhin duh lo che mahila;
Ka TARMIT i ni reng dawn si a…
Aw… ka TARMIT, i tello chuan engmah lo mai ka lo ni e
March 6th, 2011 at 10:56 pm
TARMIT ti-a hming kan lo vuah hi a fuh lo deuh ka ti thin ngawt mai. Tar lo tak tak hian an vuah (Bun ni lo, vuah)fur tawh sia..
I rawn khawih tha viau e…
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:05 pm
Hahaha..! Lal Mickey leh! A va han tha hlimawm dangdai tunlai ve leh! I luck lutuk hi ka lo hlim em em a nih chu!
Kan ram net satel hi ka ning bawn phirs!
A aw ka hria, a hmel ka hmu lo.
A nui ri ka hria, min la seih si lo.
A hlimthla ka hmu, takram chang si lo.
La hmu hawt si lo hian, ka lo sitar ve em em a.
Min la hmu bik lo, min lo biak dawn nia.
I unaunu ngei kha!
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:08 pm
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:14 pm
one word: Lasik
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:15 pm
Thuthiam te tihdan pangai a ni e… min ti hlim… Nia tarmit tih hi chuan phawk fuh chiah lo deuh a ni e…
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:17 pm
Nula-tlangval tarmit bun ve2 inngaizong in hre toh em le? Keichu k hre reng… Dating don cuan an phelh loh pon lens an vuah zeih zel!
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:33 pm
Tun hma te kha chuan t.v, computer te a awm ve vak lova. Mit khaw hmufiahlo chu, tar an ni tlangpui. Chuvang chuan ‘Tarmit’ anti ta a ni ang e.
Vanduai deuh chu naupang te pawh mit thalo, mitpual adt.an awm tho bawk.
Tunah chuan naupang kum 4/5 vel lek pawh tarmit vuah an awm ta fur mai.
Tarmit chu thil pakhat hming a ni mai. Naupangin emaw thalaiin an vuah avanga naupangmit/thalaimit emaw hming dang vuah a tul chuang pawn ka hre love!
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:43 pm
Hun kha leh chen kan lo inmelh dun ve ta,
Tawngkam khat reng pawh ka la hlan ve silo che,
ih..ih…ih…phuah chhan chi ah pawh ka lo ngai ngailo che..
Mike, i thiam em em e…tin, tleirawl chhuah lai a tarmit bun kha chu a nuam ber lo khawp mai…hehe…
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March 6th, 2011 at 11:59 pm
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:11 am
haha…chhiar a nuam dangdai hle mai…:D
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:28 am
Simple poem, humour tan hrim2 i phuah pawh a ni maithei,mahse..me like simple poem..hehe..tha reuh ltk.
Pu zo Rock-a iang in.
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:42 am
Tha hle mai; kei pawh ka tarmit hi ka ning thei râp
mahse a tel lo chuan ka nun a kim thei tawh si lo (snifff..) 
aduhi tip Lasik hi pum thum cheng ngaa an zawrh hunah lei ngei tur a ni
contact lens chu ka taimaknain a tlin lo phawt 
chuvangin tarmit frame nalh hi zawng zel phawt ang 
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March 7th, 2011 at 1:27 am
Thiam fu mai
Nia tarmit hi maw ram changkang ho ah hian naupang te te kum 6 vel te hian an bun fir fer zuknia mawle naupang mit ani ve tho.hahah
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March 7th, 2011 at 4:05 am
A ninawm teh tak e..tarmit hi!
mahse han bun peih loh rei lo te chhung pawh hian kan vairuai a,kan chhaw chhuai hman a ni zel mai si a!!
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March 7th, 2011 at 4:49 am
Hla nge thu pawh ka hre hrang love ka ti!
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March 7th, 2011 at 4:50 am
Rempui, tarmit bun chu a va keh duhawm ve..
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March 7th, 2011 at 7:03 am
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March 7th, 2011 at 7:51 am
Poetry nge Song aw? song nih chuan a thluk siam har ngawt ang
haha
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March 7th, 2011 at 8:01 am
Ho mai mai e a. Mizo literature hi kan nawp kualvel nasa thin mange awwww
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March 7th, 2011 at 10:11 am
@ Tuaisiala, lutuk tlat, ka lo biak em em ang che^_^
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March 7th, 2011 at 10:16 am
poetry nge song , mizo literature nawp kual vel emaw, hla nge thu tih lam ka thlu lem lo, ka chhungrila awm ka puangchhuak a nih chuan ka duh tawk viau
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March 7th, 2011 at 10:38 am
CyberThug leh a chunga mi khi an bo dûn ve hle mai!
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March 7th, 2011 at 11:42 am
Eheee..Mickey inpuanna chu lehh!!!
Good post 
@tuaisiala “A aw ka hria, a hmel ka hmu lo.
A nui ri ka hria, min la seih si lo.
A hlimthla ka hmu, takram chang si lo.
La hmu hawt si lo hian, ka lo sitar ve em em a.
Min la hmu bik lo, min lo biak dawn nia.
I unaunu ngei kha!” i ler latux o!!!
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March 7th, 2011 at 11:43 am
Kum sawmthum chuang ka lo vuah ve tawh a, bifocal nenlam … glasses insi rupa in-kiss chang chu a awm ve mawlh … free verse takngial pawha dah nachang ka hre hlei ne’m … i vawrh chhuak mawi kher mai.
Atir lam ka chhiar khian GUDKHA lam turah ka bel ti tih a … atawp atawpah a lang fiah fai chiang ta e, la thup cheu la, rilru sen phah deuhna turin … a ngaihnawm lehzual ang emaw chu le?
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:06 pm
@chawnghilh, a lawmawm e… hei te hi ka thiam ve tawk a la ni rih e
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:08 pm
@tuaisiala, Aremruati, kan tawh em? enge a chanchin te i hre hnai em?
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:21 pm
Mickey, nimin tlaiah khan ka kal a, an that lai a ni e. A khawsik a awm tawh rih lo. Tun karah chhuah an inbeisei.
Jewel, i unaunu i hre lo mai mai a nih kha aw..!
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:26 pm
mickey tha lutuk. van thiam em em. ka ohu zawk lawm le
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:30 pm
@TuaiSialA heheee…i phuah nalh bon top e!!
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March 7th, 2011 at 12:50 pm
Thu nge hla tih sawi zel a ngai lo Mickey, zam hlek suh eh!!
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March 7th, 2011 at 1:24 pm
nalh khop my… keep it up!
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March 7th, 2011 at 1:33 pm
Tuaisial ka man che nia aw… Ka thianpa lo ni reng in. Min hrilh duh lo vela ka hre leh tho sia..
Thianpa Buangpui i tawngkam hman a tunlai hle mai.. tlema rual u deuh te chuan he i poem/song? hi ho an ti viau maithei… mahse kei chuan thu leh hla a rem leh rem lova tawng upa emaw tlem a tawng danglam deuh hman sek kan tum hi ka hne.. tunlai mi kan nia tunlai tawngin ziah mai tur tih hi ka ngaihdan a ni ve tlat. Post tha ve tho mai, 
tak2ah post tha khawp e… 
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March 7th, 2011 at 2:03 pm
Hahaha.. Afak, ka inthup lo em lawm..!
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March 7th, 2011 at 2:40 pm
@afaka, a pro pik atang hian a hriat em khi…
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March 7th, 2011 at 2:44 pm
Afaka sawi hi kan sawi chhunzawm ve lawk, a remchang bawk a, tawng upa, leh thu khun khan leh un pui puite han hman a, thlasiak mau puah pawp pawp, tih ang chi vel hi kei pawh ka ning… Tunlai mi kan nih angin tunlai tawnga ziah mai hi ka ngaih dan a ni. Aizawla piang leh seilian ngat tan phei chuan tawng upa hi kan hre lo lehzual ania…
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March 7th, 2011 at 3:06 pm
Sim2 in Mizo trong hi a “pawngsual” thei ami??
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March 7th, 2011 at 3:15 pm
Tuaisial chaw kan eikhawm leh tawh mai dawn mi? mahse ngawi reng bik tawh lo la…
jewel-i hi kan sawm ve duh angem?
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March 7th, 2011 at 3:25 pm
#36: theih e
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March 7th, 2011 at 3:43 pm
Afak, eikhawm ila ni mai lawm. Mahse, ‘ka rin aiin chaw i heh daih’ kha chu intih tawh loh tur aw..! Jewel chu a hautak mai mai!
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March 7th, 2011 at 4:02 pm
kei chu sawm hran ka ngai lo – ka thu ber don…eirong ka bawl don tlat a!
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March 7th, 2011 at 9:49 pm
He paws chu Jewel a sawina anih dawn hi ka ti ngot a!! Ka va ringsual em!
Tarmit hi chu mi tamtak tan a va tangkai em! Jewel nge ka thu ber dawn i tih leh ringawta? 
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March 8th, 2011 at 9:10 am
@tuaisiala & Afaka, insawn tur hnai vai an awm lo ami? eng emaw chaw eikhawm han chhuanlam tur tal pawh… Nya, Jewel chu sawm lo mah ila a rawn kal tho ang
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