Piallei chen bel tura chunnu chawiin,
Kal lai tuahrem nan a hnuntui ka dawn;
Zuapa tangah beia nichhun awiin,
A mawi reng dawn lovin hringnun ka tawn.
Nawmsip bawlin kan chen chhunni kan vui,
Ropui lansarh chakin laitual kan leng;
Mi tawna sahrang hmu lianin kan ui,
Neih zawh tumin duhana len kan deng.
Aw..hei hi emni he kan lei damchhan,
Chawimawi phutin aw dawtvar kan sawi tak;
Siamtu reng dawn lovinhe lei damchhan,
Pakar hnawm zingah maw kan vui liam tak.
Hei zawk hi le,siamtu`n min din chhan chu.
A mah faka chawimawi ‘Lal khrista’ chu.
(Sonnnet phuah zirna a ni a post zirna a ni bawk! Rhyme scheme ab ab cd cd ef ef gg. ai e.)
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March 12th, 2011 at 1:13 am
ka dam chhan 1st chu Pathian fak leh chawimawi,a pahnihna chu ei leh in
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March 12th, 2011 at 1:27 am
“Neih zawh tumin duhana len kan deng.”
duhamna tih tur ava ang ve?
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March 12th, 2011 at 1:38 am
Poem thra tak anih k ring.
helamah hian k ril lo ve nasa sia, a omzia k hriat leh hriat loh poh ka hre lo, eh.. 
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March 12th, 2011 at 2:19 am
i titha thlawt e
..i sonnet phuah hi a rhyme scheme i hman danah hian Shakespear-a sonnet phuah dan ziarang i chhawmin ka hria..a tlar tin hi lam(syllables) 10 zel a nia..kei pawn Shakespearan sonnet kalphung zawm hian ka lo phuah ve tawha tun thleng hian khawiah mah ka la tlangzarh ngam lo chu a nih hi..ka hla phuah kha sit miau hek i 
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March 12th, 2011 at 2:37 am
sonnet, balad blah….blah….blah Rhyme scheme abcde tih vel emaw ni phuah thin ho hi chu literature lama zirsang ni ngei turah kan dah ngawt a, mahse hetiang hla emaw ni thu emaw ni ho hi chuan ka lung an ti leng thlawt lo, a rilna ka pawh phak ve loh vang a nia nge! Nge construction leh rhyme rem tak si, mizo rilrem zawng tak si in an la phuahchhuak lo zawk. Engle khaw le
ve ngawt mai teh ang.
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March 12th, 2011 at 6:28 am
tukchhuak nuam ule..
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March 12th, 2011 at 6:52 am
Vulmawi hla pakhatin, “Saisen tet a, maurua ianga tuai thar leh hi ka nuam mange…” a tih kha kan hriat chhuah daih chu.
Hla thu thiam hi ka chak ngawt mai
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March 12th, 2011 at 7:07 am
I dek nalh fu mai!
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March 12th, 2011 at 8:51 am
A tha khawp mai. Khi poem hmang khian Govt Aizawl College-ah lawmman pakhatna a dawng tawh (a kum ka hre tawh lo). Tin, a ziaktu hian Govt Aizawl College-a a kal chhung (kum 3) zawngin poetry inphuahsiakah pakhatna a hauh vek a ni.
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March 12th, 2011 at 9:38 am
Shakespearean sonnet tha ve khat tak anih hi. Mahse @smack min hrethiam la critical analysis tawite ka lo siam lawk ang chu.
1. Rhymme scheme a dik tha viau e
2. A poet tum a phawk chhuak tha thawkhat
3. Pakar – Pangkar(chawmpangkar), Duhana – duhamna, Khrista – Krista….hian ka mit a la deuh.
4. Iambic Pentameter hman tur anih laiin i hmaih thelh daih.
5. A flow/stress hun a random vek a, awmzia a nei lo
6. Pentameter inthenna mumal a awm lo. Thu pakhat ent. duhamna, chawimawina tihte khi phel a ngai tut a, chu chuan a flow a tichhe vek. Tin tlar danga a lam 5na leh 6na zel khi lo enchiang leh teh.
Tawk phawt se, sawisel tum hrim hrim ka ni lo, lawmman dawn tawhna a lo nih phei chuan hriatthiamna ka ngen e. Hma kan sawn zel theih nan ka hriat ve tawk beitham tak ka han sawi ve mai a ni e.
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March 12th, 2011 at 10:58 am
smack i thiam lutuk, khitiang phuahchhuah duhna rilru i neih bakah thiamna i nei hi ka fak che. ti zel rawh aw, i thiam lutuk e
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March 12th, 2011 at 12:02 pm
Rhyme scheme lampang chu ka hre lem law, mahse a thra khawp mai i in zirna mai mai mah khi ti khi a nih chuan, a tak tak phei chu turu viau ang chu.Han phuah zel teh
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