A khi chhimtui raltiang pana pheikhai,
Hmartiang tha zopui val dawntuaite hi;
Tam,harsat kar’n ka rel law’ng e kirzai,
Thliah rel na’ng e, an par zemawi siau khi.
Tawn thil eng pawh kan zopui tan tiin,
Hnam changkangte hriam, hnam ber ka ni e;
Ka thlir kan zopui thar tur, kan nakin,
Kan thangchhuahpuan nen run kan lawi za e.
Mahse duhthusam leng mai lo ni maw,
Buhzute’n val chhangthem an chan zo ta;
Sahrang tlawm fo thin vala, tang rawh aw,
Kan nghak reng che, nang lal tha zopui fa.
Kan lungrual chuan kan hmachhawn zobawm par,
Rihlipui,run,buannel nen zopui thar.
March 12th, 2012 at 9:08 am
A van tha tak em!
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March 12th, 2012 at 9:09 am
First tih awih loh
tren tren
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March 12th, 2012 at 9:36 am
tha khawp mai,
kir zai ka rel law’ng e tih ai hian lo’ng tih hman ni se ka ti mai mai. tin ‘kirzai’ tlar tawpa dah hi a rhyme siam tur atan tih a hriat mai a. rhyme siam tum lutuk hi a chhiartu tan chuan a chuti lutuk duh lo khawp mai.
Hnam changkangte hriam, hnam ber ka ni” ka va man lo teuh em, a tawp ber tlar hnih pawh hi. i hrilhfiah chuan ril ka ti let hlauh dawn a ni.
sonnet hian metre a nei a, a metre dik thlap tur ang hi chuan ka mizotawng contralto tone hian har ka lo ti ve ia.
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:02 am
A thain a mawi e.
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:09 am
Tha thawkhat eeeee…..
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:10 am
a ni khawp mai@vakul, ‘law’ng e’ tih ai khian ‘ lo’ng e’ tia hman zawk tur chu a nih hmel e, tin, a tlar tawp khi,
Kan lungrual chuan kan hmachhawn mek zopui thar, rihlipui,run,buannel te mawina zobawm par nen ka tih duhna a ni e…eng pawh nise, a chhiar dan in lo thiam mai a niang chu..ka lawm e
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:16 am
tin, hnam changkangte hriam,hnam ber ka ni e tih khi, hnam changkangte hriamhrei leh ngunhnam ber ka ni e ka tihna a ni e…
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:18 am
Ril hle mai
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:27 am
a nalh khawp mai… phuah zel rawh,tha lutuks
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:32 am
Tha lutuk, thiam khawp mai
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:47 am
A ril hmel hle mai…
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March 12th, 2012 at 10:58 am
Couplet pawhin a rawn fun kim reuh khawp alawm! Punctuation erawh tlemin a fe-re deuh!
I suangtuahna tawmin kan thlawk delh delh mai alawm …!
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March 12th, 2012 at 11:07 am
Mizotawnga sonnet ziak thei hi chu ka ngaisang..a thufuna chu engpawh nise
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March 12th, 2012 at 11:30 am
muantea te’n an comment thiam ang…kei chu ka chhiar chhuak tawp
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March 12th, 2012 at 8:50 pm
@roseparvul, ka lawm e..
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