Lûngmawlin duhloh puan ka pawm vang hian,
Uicho tluk leka lák tlâk loh ka ni;
Ngûrnun aia ka thlan’ zawk hlimna hian-
Mual liamin lungngaihna chaw min barh si.
Awmlai lûnglian lo hrâng nâ in ti a,
Lenrual zingah pawh luaithli in nûl thin;
In ngaih fam zûn lêng iangin min zém ta,
Nun khawhár, cháuva mangang chung hianin.
Chawlhtui ningzû tlân in nun hlim ka tum,
Hêl ngailoh lánu tánga’n ka pawm phah;
Inchhirna tur rêng hian ka lûng a dum,
Ruih lúngpuam thiltihin dâwn a ti hah.
Nun hlimna a bo, lûnglâi ka chhir e,
Amah hnâwl mah i, ka fa a pai e.
…………..
(Rhyme Scheme:abab,cdcd,efef,gg.)
*****Mipa pakhat a awm a, amah chu tlangval a ni. Zet-u-zu a in fo va. A ruih tawh chuan a dâwn a táwi hmúk tawh a. A duh lêm loh nula a tawng a; a harhfim lai chuan chu nula chu a ngaihthah a, a ruih laiin a thlauhthla phal si lo. A tawpah zawng a fa a pai ta a…. tiin he hla kalhmang hi sawi mai teh ang. Ka hun tawn chu a ni hauh lo va. Midang nuna thleng, hlaa ka chham chhuah mai a ni e. A tlar bultin hawrawp remkhawm hi a hla thupui nen inmiltir ka tumna lamah ka buai rei khawp mai. Eng pawh ni se, Zet-u-Zu hi chu aw………… ******
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:03 pm
I phuah thiam 1st e.
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:09 pm
Hahaha…….chu tlangval chu a va vannei ve mole. :lol: :lol: :lol: ……. Hetianga phuah chhan meuh a i neih chuan a phuloh hmangaihna a dawng a nih chu mole hahahahaha
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:15 pm
Tluanga hi i khàwi ngam ang u.
Lengzem-a pawh a lo ni reng mai thei 
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:19 pm
heta apostrophe hi engatan nge??
Lûngmawl leh Lûnglian tih a a thlukna dah hi a dik em le? :rolleyes:
idea a thra khop mai! Phuah thiamlo k ti phal lo che… :kiss:
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:21 pm
va phuah tha ve a…. hetiang ang i sawi mipakhat hi hriat ka nei ve a sin. :lol:
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:27 pm
Harhfim lai chuan kan insum thei a, zet-u-zu hian kan insumtheihna a tibo zawk em aw? Chutiang bawkin nulate paw’n an lo star tlangval khan ruih phelh phulha an fight hian an lo inphal leh mai thin emaw ni?
Nula hi harhfim laiin fight der chhin teh. “Hey… Zu i ruih loh kha!” an ti chawk.
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Tluk loh rim nam hrim2 e…..
I phuah chhan tlangvala chu mi vannei anih chu..duh ten tha takin chawi hle2 rawh se..min hmangaihtute tluka hlu an awm lo te ti ve duah ila…
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:42 pm
Ka hre ve chak hle mai a, mahse ka hriat a nen chuan an in anglo khop mai………….. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: .
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:45 pm
zet-u zu hi tlangval tan zawlaidi tha mi a ni
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December 8th, 2010 at 5:59 pm
I style ang hian hmanah ka bialnu hmingin Pathian hla ka phuah tawh.
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December 8th, 2010 at 6:09 pm
This is what they call ‘Sonnet’ and it’s in Shakespeare’s style. Thiam khawps mai.
Kudos!!
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December 8th, 2010 at 6:37 pm
I phuah thiam hle mai..hetiang dinhmun a din hi thil hlauhawm tak zawng a ni…
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December 8th, 2010 at 6:49 pm
Thil thlen duh hmel tak chu a ni e. Misual zingah pawh hian a tawng an awm fur lo maw…NOI. I va han phuah thiam em. Awmze nei si sawi tum chiang si rhyming nei si,. A tanna hawrawp awmze nei bawk si..a si hlir a ni e.
**********rated.
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December 8th, 2010 at 7:13 pm
Full Support
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December 8th, 2010 at 7:22 pm
A tha hle mai.
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December 8th, 2010 at 8:04 pm
Phuah nalh tha khawp mai, a chhan erawh chu Zet-u-zu vang nimahse Zawl-ai-di chhe mi-ah ngaihsak mai ang.
He tlangval, a phuah chhana hi kei chu ka nilo…hihihi :lol:
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December 8th, 2010 at 8:10 pm
Hetiang type hyn hmanah ka ex hla ka phuahsak ve toh.. Zan thla eng hnuaiah kan sa dun rat2 thin. a lom ve thy rapz… mi fa te angin zaithiam ve phei ila chu khiiitah khiiitah…
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December 8th, 2010 at 9:00 pm
Phuah thiam khawp mai.
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December 8th, 2010 at 10:01 pm
Ka ning chiang….. :lol:
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December 9th, 2010 at 1:56 am
Rhyme scheme chungchang hi tlinglo takin ka’n sawi ve mai mai.
A rhyme scheme aiin a thu hi keichuan ka ngai pawimawh thin. Sonnet phei hi chu a rhyme scheme hi a strict a, rhyme scheme dik tak mahse thu in hne remlo aichuan rhyme free an tih ang, one liner kan ti dawn nge… ang chi hi thu mawi tak leh tlar in mil tak in rem khawm anih chuan a mawi thei viau thovin ka hria. A awl pawh a awl zawk. hehehe.
Rhyme Scheme leh syllable dang daih pawhin tlar 14 poem phuah ila, Non-Shakespearean sonnet ani ve mai lawm
Milton-a Paradise lost tepawh khan rhyme scheme a nei bik lova, a ropui loh phah chuang hleinem :wink:
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December 9th, 2010 at 7:38 am
“Tu sawn nge i rawn pai leh tak?”
“Munga and friends …”
He hmeichhia hian a tlin ve hang hang asin!
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December 9th, 2010 at 7:41 am
Chawlhtui ? Chawl+tui … chawl is yeast … ale is chawltui, not chawlHtui!
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December 9th, 2010 at 8:56 am
@funny sawi ang@khi chu Free Verse a nia, rhyme hi a tha a rhyme lo pawh a ngaihhlutawm tho. Walt Whitman kha Father of Free verse an ti thin. Kei chuan ka ngaihtuahnaa thil awmte hi free verse ngeia puan chhuah hi ka duh zawk thin.
Tin, hei hi sonnet a ni lo. ” Buan ang pawm, puan ang hnawl, chawltui ningzu”
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December 9th, 2010 at 10:08 am
Ziak Tupa Tluanga: Ka chhuang che a nalh lutuk. Tui ber leh vei ber niawm ziazang in ZU chungchang ka post vak vak thin. Mahse ka tui lem lo a, ka tuina ber zawk chu hetiang lam hi a ni daih asin. I thu post hi chu ka tiin ka duh lutuk. Save hial tlak a ni. I thu post ah pawh khian kei ve tehlul hian sawi tur tlem chu ka nei ve a mahse ka sawi hrih lo ang. Ka sawi tum zawk chu hei hi a ni.
Kan HOME (Misual) ah hian hetiang lama tui mi te hian hmun kan chang tlem riau a hriatna ka nei. He ka hriatna hi 8/10 chu a dik tih ka chiang bawk. Mahse pawi ti lo ang. Galileo pawh a tir ah chuan a thil hmuhchhuah leh a tuina avang khan khai hlum an lo tum hial tawh kha. Nang leh kei chauh hi hetianga tui hi kan ni lo mai thei.
SAWMNA : Kan HOME ah hian hmun chang tlem viau mah ila, tawp lo in I in pho chhuak thin ang. Engtik ni ah emaw chuan ngaihhlut der hi kan la hlawh der ve ngei ang tih hi ka ring tlat asin.
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December 9th, 2010 at 10:19 am
@24 : Min lo chhiar hmaih vaih chuan….Krismas putar kut tum a ni mai
Mahse ka tui ve dan erawh mi ziak sa lo chhiar ve leh an suangtuahna zuk tawmpui ve mai hi a ni, ka thawhhlawk lemlo, mahni tui tuiin ka tui ve tawp, Ar pui tui iangin.. :lol:
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December 9th, 2010 at 11:06 am
Zet-u-Zu hi chu aw
Zak thei lo nazawng an rui lo lem lo
Engah hmain vuina tur zawng lo la
Thiam i chang a nih pawhin ngawih chuh rawh.
Uchuak taka thiltih hian mualphona a thlen châwk!
Zahna kawnah a hruai ang che ang.
Uang tawh lo turin i muhil thuai mai tur a sin.
He thu hre rengin, zawm tum tlat la
I mal tan hunah pawh zam chuang suh
Chuan tih fuh hun i la nei ngei ang!
Aw an va riang hlawm ve o i la ti thei zawk ang
Phuah a har phian nih hi, han chhiar thla ve teh, tlar tin bul hi!
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December 9th, 2010 at 11:10 am
Zet-u-zu
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December 14th, 2010 at 11:34 am
Post hlui deuh tawh mahse ka han hai hawng leh lawk:
@ Shylo: Ni kei pawh thu leh hla ah hian arpui a tui ruih thin ang hian tui ve lem lo mah ila, ka tui ve phian a. Tui zawng zawng pawh an thiam thiam chuang lem lo ang hian, kei pawh tui mah ila ka thiam chuang lem law.
Ka duh tawk in thil ka han ziak ve a. Ka tawpna chu “Ka vei hi ka ziak em? Ka ziah hi ka vei a ni em?” tih hi a ni leh daih thin.
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