Samah sam luat a awm em ni?
Sam zel mai dawn hungruk duhai;
Duhai tin kim tawng mah lo i’
A dam mah na a riang thinlai.
Theih chang teh se hnu chhawn ka nuam
Lun lua, ri luai vangkhawpui hi,
Chungmu iang in sa huai phairuam
Kirtiang rel san ka nuam a ni.
Len lai rel in va tum i la
Lentu chawi vel tukram dai an,
Tah chuan run rem a rem mah na
Kum tluang hluan hring siahthing hnuai an.
Va zai, tui thiang, ri mawi ngaiin
Tuan va rel i’, tlai ni tin in.
(Y) 
October 8th, 2010 at 3:32 am
hla ava kal deuh ve
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October 8th, 2010 at 4:04 am
kan second mai teh ang, tunlai chu misual zingah hla phuah thiam leh thawnthhu ziah thiam an pung riau mai matt^version te tak ngial pawhin an ziak tawh ania. Lo ziak zel teh chhiar a nuam in a man hla thei e
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October 8th, 2010 at 6:18 am
Hla lam a lang ani maw .Ka mu tawh tah ang.
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October 8th, 2010 at 7:49 am
Sam zel mai rawh HUNGRUK duhai
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October 8th, 2010 at 8:01 am
“Sam zel mai dawn hungruk duhai;”
Hei hi i tawngkam chher thar nge typing mistake?
I ti mi dawn khawpin ka hria, i sawi tum hi a chiang tlat.
Kei pawh ka duh dan chuan khaw pawn/ khaw daia inbenbel hi ka chak zawk mah. Khawpui chep lutuk a awm hi chu a hrehawmin a thaw ipik thlakte ka ti ve thin.
“Lun lua, ri luai vangkhawpui hi”
Pu Vankhama chuan “Khuai ang lawina vangkhawpui” a ti mai thei a ni. NOI
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October 8th, 2010 at 10:17 am
@ 4 & 5 Awkhaih, lo type sual a nih hi! ‘lungruk’ tur a ni e.
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October 8th, 2010 at 10:23 am
Sâmah sâm luat a awm nem maw; lo sâm zel teh.
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October 8th, 2010 at 10:30 am
Ava tawk tiu-teu ve! I thu tè khian dàwn a ti sei lua e ka thian…
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October 8th, 2010 at 10:47 am
Tha khawp mai,Far From The Madding Crowd, Thomas Hardy ziah te pawh min ti hre chhuak e.
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October 8th, 2010 at 11:24 am
Sàmah sàm luat a awm em ni?
Sàm zèl mai dâwn lungrùk duh-ai;
Duhai’ tin kim tawng mah lo i’
A dam mah nà a riang thinlai.
Theih chang teh se hnuchhawn ka nuam
Lùn lua, ri luai vàngkhawpui hi,
Chung-mu iangin sahuai phairuam
Kìrtiang rèlsan ka nuam a ni.
Lèn lai rèlin va trum ila
Lèntu chawi vèl tukram daia’n,
Tahchuan rûn rem a rem mah nà
Kumtluang hluan hring siahthing hnuaia’n.
Va zai, tui thiang, ri mawi ngaiin
Truan va rêl i’, tlai ni tinin.
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October 8th, 2010 at 11:27 am
Phuah thiam hle mai, inthlahrung duh lovin —punctuation ka ngainat ve danin ka rawn thual vel! :wink:
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October 8th, 2010 at 2:31 pm
Emi, Duhthusam ni zawk em le?
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October 8th, 2010 at 6:18 pm
@Lushai, Ni e, khawlum zual chang phei hi chuan tiraw? Pu Vankhama thiam dan hi chu a ril ani.
@CFL, anih chiah aw!
@Kawlhawk, han dawn zel la…
@Xaia, Far from… lung a ti leng reuh.
@Chawnghilh, Kawlhawk nen khian in va thiam bik ve! thlukna key hi khawnge in hmuh bik?
@Ozima, ni lo. ‘Duhthu’ hi noun, ‘sam’ hi verb in ka hmang, hetah hi chuan. ‘Duhthusam’ chu noun vek a ni ang.
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October 8th, 2010 at 6:59 pm
chawngchilh hian khitianga thlukna dah dan khi rawn post se hma kan sawnna tur a n, kei ka thiamna hian a tlin lo nge ka mawl vang, ka dah ve thiam der lo nia!!??
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October 8th, 2010 at 8:16 pm
A va simple mawi hnaiin a va tha zaih zaih ve!!
Tunah critical appreciation lam (Ti veee ziah :smile:
1. Rhymme scheme tha tak a nei a, a thu a ti ulh chuang si lo.
2. Tetrameter hmangin, thu un pui pui hmang si lovin, a va mawihnai em!
3. A meter a dik rualin a flow erawh fuh lo lai a awm zeuh zeuh.
4. Repetition hnaivai tak (duh ai) ka hmu a, a pehhel theih ka ring.
5. ‘…….tawng mah lo i’ tih hi ‘tawng lo mah i’ tih ni zawk se ka lo ti ve ngawt. Tawng mawi tak ‘i’ hma-ah hian ‘v’ lam tel a awl tlat.
6. A thuken hi a ironic rualin nature hlutna a rawn tarlang tel a, hemi inchawhpawlh hi a tha khawp mai. Khawpui hulum mitthlaa a lan laiin buannel dai riai mai nen a rawn khaikhin a, kan lunglentu zawk ni thei turin tuk loh ram dai a rawn chhawp mawihnai hi a hlu-a, a thutum ber a tilangsar thiam hi tha ka ti khawp mai.
Clap! Clap! Clap! Ti zel rawh.
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October 8th, 2010 at 8:53 pm
A va tha em! Pu Muantea sawi angin, Meter dik, Rhyme Scheme tha bawk siin, Mizo tawng mawi, un leh ril em em awm chuang si lovin i han phuah chhuak thei a, a nalh ngiang mai. Min tiphur thei dawn tlat…ka la rawn phuah ve maithei a ni..
I ‘Duhthu sam’ hi, type sual zeuh leh thu zawm tur zawm loh te awm lo se chuan ‘duhaisam’ a tling hial ang!
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October 8th, 2010 at 9:05 pm
Ka sawi hmaih pakhat – thu inzawm tur zawm loh a awm nual. Hla ni mahse diktaka ziak a nih loh chuan a ti hlu lo thei tlat.
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October 8th, 2010 at 9:08 pm
“Len lai rel in va tum i la
Lentu chawi vel tukram dai an,
Tah chuan run rem a rem mah na
Kum tluang hluan hring siahthing hnuai an.” A fuh thlawt e Emi, thiam hle mai, han tizel rawh.
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