As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called “best friend”. I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn’t notice me like that, and I knew it.
After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before and handed them to her. She said “thanks” and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.
11th grade
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn’t want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep.
She looked at me, said “thanks” and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.
Senior year
The day before prom she walked to my locker. “My date is sick” she said; he’s not going to go well, I didn’t have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as “best friends”. So we did. Prom night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step! I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she isn’t think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said “I had the best time, thanks!” and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.
Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn’t notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, “you’re my best friend, thanks” and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.
A Few Years Later
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. I watched her say “I do” and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn`t see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said “you came!”. She said “thanks” and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love her but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why.
Funeral
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my “best friend”. At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years. This is what it read:
I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn’t notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don’t want to be just friends, I love him but I’m just too shy, and I don’t know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me!
I wish I did too… I thought to my self, and I cried.
I Love You
“A ziaktu hriat loh”
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:31 pm
Myanmar ram atang love story lo chhuak ka hriat HMASAK ber a ni tlat mai hei chu.
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:33 pm
A va khawngaihthlak tak em
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:35 pm
communication, communication, communication, hi a va pawimawh tak em.
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:38 pm
Hmanni post pakhata thawnthu inang deuh ka tih kha ni maw.Va ngaihnawm em.
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:38 pm
Nakin ah mut dwn h ka chhiar ng,mut titui chi ni tlt.
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:42 pm
henu hi ni thei a ngem awww????
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v.....re=related
balma film dl duh tan — https://www.myanmarcelebrity.com/
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October 4th, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Saptawng hi chu a…………..
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:05 pm
Zirsangkima thawnthu hmanni a post english version emaw ka ti a!
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:35 pm
A thupui ka en khian, Irrawady lui kamah, tih leh Maimom Sanapui. tih kha kan hriat chhuah zawk chu a. Zirlaibu ah khan a awm ve ngei thin kha nia a story pawh ka hre tawhlove.
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:40 pm
ka edit theih miahloh chu a. Va ho e.
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:40 pm
#4 and #8. keipawh he thu hi ka lo chhiar tawh a, zozam ah ni ta in ka hria mizo tawng in a chhuak tawh. a let thiam em em mai leh nghal.. a let tu ka hre tawh lo a lawm le..
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:42 pm
funny….story hian a inspire lutuk che anga i chhelo tih zawng zawng bem i lo tum ngawt ange auh :mrgreen:
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:45 pm
#8. Hmanah, he thawnthu hi a then lai lai ka dawng nawlh nawlh a, mizotawnga dah atan ka ît ngang mai a, kum khat chuang a plot tur ka ngaihtuah hnuah ‘If tomorrow never comes’ kha ka ziak chhuak ta a ni e.
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October 4th, 2010 at 6:48 pm
@13,a nih ka ring deuh a
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:01 pm
A mizo kha chuan ka rilru a hneh khawp mai a,tuna mi hi chu ka english thiamloh a leiah ka lunglenna khawpin ka let chhuak thiamlo.A ngaihnawm khawp mai.
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:02 pm
Burma ramah graduate nachang te an lo hre ve ni mo? :mrgreen: tanakha leh hairep siam an zirna college tal aniag..
keichu hetiang hi keimah leh ka bul ami te chungah chuan thleng thei ah ka ngailo. Mitmei leh kan bul a an chezia atang ringawt hian thui tak thil a hriat theih sin..!!
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:19 pm
He post chu PLAGIARISM a nih hi…
A va pawi ve, admin te kan lo fimkhur lo deuh a nih hi. “Myanmar” tih kan hmuh avang hian original emaw kan lo ti palh pawh aniang.
Google search ah result a tam mai… mahse eng ber hi nge ni ang le original source?
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:20 pm
FIR FIR FIR
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:27 pm
hehe.. site hran hranah a tam mai he post hi… a original writer chuan FIR thehluh tur a nei hnem awm?
Engpawh nise misual.com policy kan sawi angin, source hi kan ngai pawimawh em em a, chuvangin hei hi chu “Source: Google” kan ti tal teh ang
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:30 pm
@ 19 sawrz—internet ti zawk ru…search engine dang pawh hmang theitho :mrgreen:
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:37 pm
Sandman-a tan chuan ‘I’m too shy’ tih vel chu problem a ni lo phawt! a shy lo lutuk hian a hnawt darh zawk! Source: ZBonez
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:37 pm
tu emaw ni star te tan card pawh leizak min hriatchhuah tir deuh e a…a title ringawt en chuan, ka chhiar lo
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:43 pm
@ bmw…sandman a chu shy lo khawp mai anti, a liners hmang deuh ber chu as follows (sawrz-google):
1) That outfit looks great on you, but it would look better on my bedroom floor.
2) I lost my number. Can I borrow yours?
3) If I told you that you have a great body would you hold it against me?
4) Call me Fred Flintstone, because I’ll make your bed rock
@ fonz…tu maw card lei sak :lol:
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:50 pm
zualbonez’s pick-up line that works like a charm everytime: If you were a new sandwich at Mcdonalds, you’de be called McGorgeous.
Sandman’s pick-up line that never works: That’s a nice shirt. Can I talk you out of it?
gtg…nakinah ka rawn OT leh ang
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October 4th, 2010 at 7:56 pm
A ngaihnawm hle mai. Ka save teh ang, plagiarism pawh ni se, a hlutna a bo chuang lo ve.
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October 4th, 2010 at 8:00 pm
Zualbonez ve thung-
1)Apart from being sexy, what do
you do for a living?
2)Are you a parking ticket? (What?) You got fine written all over you.
3)As she’s leaving….Hey aren’t you forgetting something? She:What? Me!
4)Baby did you fart, ’cause you
blow me away!
5)Baby, if you were words on a
page, you’d be what they call fine print
6)Baby, somebody better call God,
cuz he’s missing an angel!
7)Baby, you must be a broom,
cause you just swept me off my feet.
8)Baby, you’re the next contestant
in the game of love.
9)Can i get your picture to prove to
all my friends that angels really
do exist?
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October 4th, 2010 at 8:07 pm
STRIKE THR33 ve thung:
Are you tired? Cause you’ve been running through my mind all day.
Are you into chess? Cause I think you’ve just met your match.
Guy: Ouch! Girl: What happened? Are you ok? Guy: I just fell for you.
Are you a parking ticket? Cause you’ve got “fine” written all over you.
Did you fart ? Cause you blew me away!
If you were a booger I’d pick you.
For an athlete: Do you have a jersey? Cause I need your name and number!
Do you have any raisins? (No.) How about a date?
If looks could kill, you would be a weapon of mass destruction.
Do you have a map? Cause I got lost in your eyes.
I hope you know CPR, cause you’re taking my breath away.
I’m invisible. (Really?) Can you see me? (Yeah!) How about tomorrow night?
Are you an interior decorator? Cause when I saw you, the room became beautiful.
Is your dad a baker? Cause you’ve got nice buns!
I know I’m not a grocery item but I can tell when you’re checking me out.
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October 4th, 2010 at 8:59 pm
Are you a hmarcha sawh bawl??? Cause you’re hot.
What has 148 teeth and holds back the incredible hulk??? My Zipper!!!
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October 4th, 2010 at 9:01 pm
My love for you is like diarhhea, I just can’t hold it in.
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October 4th, 2010 at 10:30 pm
He thawnthu hi chuan lairil a fan raih rêng a ni. Ka life tam tak a pholang tlat.
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October 4th, 2010 at 10:31 pm
I tell her that I love her.She ans me she d”t love me hahahaha
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October 4th, 2010 at 10:45 pm
burma lam han sawi hi chuan khampat bung hi a lo lang ngei2…khampat zawng 3 nen…memories….
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October 4th, 2010 at 10:45 pm
christmas OT: vawiin chu masi lam ka ngaihtuah nasa lutuk ….ka chak tawh ot ot lutuk….youtube ami masi hla ka play a, nuam ras
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v.....re=related
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October 4th, 2010 at 11:08 pm
Myanmar ah ‘Prom’ te anlo hmang thin bik anih hi.Chakawm ve khawp mai.Class 7 pawh 7th grade an ti talh talh anih hi mawle
Ngaihnawm lutuk tho e.
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October 5th, 2010 at 12:24 am
Next to you was a girl, whom you stared at her. You are SHORT-SIGHTED! Go to an optician, you guy! :lol:
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October 5th, 2010 at 11:08 am
Haha! Dawihzep dun ve pangai!
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October 5th, 2010 at 5:06 pm
“A ziaktu hriat loh” tih khian ka hnuk a tiulh tlat. Anonymous ti law law se!
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October 5th, 2010 at 5:45 pm
@ Sndman (#17),
I sawi dik e; PLAGIARIZED story chu ani chiang. Asian ho hian “grade” tih tawngkam kan hmang lo; class emaw standard emaw kan ti tlangpui. Chuan Asian (Burmese included) ho hi conservative kan ni a, chutiangin “kissed me on the cheek” hi a ti mai thei lo; thrian thra pawh chu lo ni se. “Grade”, “date”, “prom”, “senior”, “graduation” tih tawngkam te atangin he story life setting hi American (USA) high school a ni tlat. Myanmar high school story ani thei lo.
A eng pawh chu lo ni se, it’s a real piece of that kind of nostalgic story and literature – I wish I had the courage to tell how I feel about her/him….
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October 5th, 2010 at 5:51 pm
@ 38 marahisbiscus…myanmar love story alawm….an school luhna hi chu International school ania, mandalay ami..an school location pawh hetah hian a en theih:
https://www.maplandia.com/burma/mandalay/
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October 5th, 2010 at 6:03 pm
@ 39 zualbonez, International School ani chuan Myanmarese education system hmang lovin, American system an hmang hmel. A eng system pawh chu lo ni se, he high school naupangte hian thuziak a thiam tlat, a ngainawm khawp mai.
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October 5th, 2010 at 6:09 pm
@ 40 marahisbiscus…nia a approach hi a dik tlat international school chhuak hi chu anni jeih mai ani :lol:
mahse a ziah lai hi chuan puitling chu ani ve tawh, hmeichhe funeral hnu a ziak ani e ….
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October 5th, 2010 at 6:30 pm
he Story hian min khawih khawp mai…
he dinhmunah hian ka ding mek a….
Huaisen a har khawp mai…
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October 13th, 2011 at 4:05 pm
Man lo em mai.
mipa te chuan duh zawng te chu bem thuai mai tur.
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October 13th, 2011 at 4:36 pm
Mipa ka nia, duhzawng ‘bem’ thuai hi a har ka tih ber a ni!!
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October 13th, 2011 at 4:50 pm
Sillyboy,
dnt be silly, attack!!!
duh loh leh ngai awh
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November 20th, 2011 at 6:18 am
wholesale bags…
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January 5th, 2014 at 4:28 pm
a thawn thu hi a hmanhmawh ka ti e… a kal vut vut a.. i want this story to be in detail yaaarrr…..
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