A rawn nghawr det det a, hmanhmawh deuhin kan en a, ‘Dr 4:30 ah k hmn ag’ tih zawng hi alo in ziak a. Sana ka en vat a, ‘A la hma hle mai a’ ka ti sap a. Tih tur ber hre lo in ka vei sek a, Chanchinbu ka la a, ka chhiar hnu vek an ni bawk si. Kan mu zal ringawt a, ka tho leh a, darthlalang hmaah ka ding a, ka arngeng awm hawt lo chu deh tumin ka zawng a, awmlo na pui chu deh tur awm silo. Ka in luah te fel ren rawn chu, hmeithai chengvawng tak in ang maiin, bungrua te chu an fai tle ve hlarh hlawm a.
Kan hawi kual a, han rem fel tur leh han tih fai ngai awm ka hmu bawk si lo. Almerah ka hawng a, a chhunga ka lehkhabu chi hrang hrang rem fel thlap te chu kan rem tha leh ringawt a. Dar 4:30 nghah ringawt chu rei dawn hle mai. Hmun dangah chaw ka ei dawn avangin rawngbawl ngai bawk si lo. Ka thianpa ka phone ta ringawt a.Zan rei tawh lamah hian ka number hriat ngai loh atangin message ka dawng a, ‘K star ltk ce..’ tih ringawt hi. Ka thian ten number dangin min rawn bawl anih ka ring a, ka chhang lem lo a, a rawn tih nawn tak chhen avang chuan ‘Tu nge va hre l ce’ tiin ka chhang ta ringawt a. ‘Kei cuan hria ce, in veng pwh hria’… Ka zawh ka zawh pawn, a in sawi duh miah lo a. Zan tin mai hian min rawn message ta ziah a, kei pawhin fiamthu ti tak deuh deuhin ka chhang ve ta zel a.
A rei hnu deuh phei chuan msg mai nilo phonein rei tak tak kan inbe thin. A aw no nalh tak mai chu ka bengah a cham reng a, min biak khat deuh chuan ka lung hi a leng veng veng thin. Ka tur nasat em avangin inhmuh a remti ve ta a, kan veng a hriat tho avangin ka inluah a inhmuh kan ti tlu ta a. Chuni chu, vawin Pathianni chawhnu hi a ni. Dar 4:30 a rik har ber tum a niang..
Ka thianpa a rawn thleng a. Ani hi chuan Total Prohibition pawh nise, in tur eng chi pawh hmuh tur mai a hre thei riau. A lakna thin nuthlawi pakhat fanu phei chu hmeltha ka ti lutuk a, zu zuar fanu atana ka ui thu hi ka sawi ka sawi thin. No thum vel kan in hnu chuan inleng ka neih tur thu ka hrilh a, ‘Ka kal vat a ngai a nih chu’ a ti mai a, min bengkhawn tha duh vak lem hlei lo a.
Chhuanlam eng eng emaw siamin min kal san ta mai reng a. Sana kan en chuan dar 4:30 alo ri tep tawh a, kan thil in na vel chu ka ti fel zung zung a. Ka phone a rawn ri a, ka la vat a, ‘Hallo…aw..rawn kal zel rawh, kawtah ka lo awm ang’ ka helhhawl lutuk chu, ka thinte hi phu dut dutin ka hria.
Ka cigarette ka tan a, kawtah ding chungin ka zu hlat hlat a. Ka piah lawk kawng kawiah chuan nula pakhat ka hmuh fo tawh hnu chhelo zet mai, nuthlawi zu zuar fanu lo phei chu ka hmu a, lo biak ngei ka tum a. A rawn hnaih chuan min rawn nuih saih a. Kei chuan hawih hawm takin, ‘Va chhe lo ve, khaw nge i kal dawn’ ka lo ti a, engdanga min chhang lo chuan ‘Hei hi em ni i in chu’… Ka harh kawk mai. Ka ringlo lutuk.
Enga tinge kan inbe fo a, phone atang pawh khan a aw chu ka lo hriat chhuah loh le.. A hnu zel chu sawi chhunzawm tawh lo mai ang, a sei lutuk dawn..
Phone atangin thian kan zawng a, tam tak phei chu inngaizawng hlen ta te pawh sawi tur an awm. Hetiang hi tha i tih leh tih loh chu i thu thu.. Kei chuan tha ka tih leh tih loh engmah ka sawi dawn lo..!
( A hnu fe ah ka thianpa hian, ka numder alo pe tih ka hria )
May 25th, 2011 at 4:30 pm
1st leh ee… hehehe
May 25th, 2011 at 4:40 pm
hehe
May 25th, 2011 at 9:05 pm
A va ho angreng!
May 25th, 2011 at 9:05 pm
tlangval nula tan chuan tawngkam bawlhhlawh leh tha lo tak a nih lem lohte chuan pawi em em na ka hre lem lo, mahse tleirawl/rawlthar in hetiang hmang a an tawngkam hman hi chu a a mawi tawk lo a tam thin an ti..lolz
May 25th, 2011 at 9:08 pm
A va tawp uihawm ve mawle
May 25th, 2011 at 9:21 pm
ka chhiar tui don chiah a top daih
May 25th, 2011 at 9:27 pm
@Mi(khual)pa Zarkawt Veng nen ka hmeh bel tlat mai chu le.
May 25th, 2011 at 9:36 pm
…..tichuan, mi(khual)pa chuan zuzuar fanu chu iai tak chungin a nihpui taa, sawn te hial a lo pai takah chuan, inneih mai loh chu hmabak a awm ta lova….iai tak chung chuan a nei ta nge nge a….Mahse; a nupui chu a lo fel em em mai si a, tlai khawhnuah a zunah a uai thar leh ta a, a luangliamin mi(sual).com-ah a rawn post ta rawi mai a ni awm e. 😀 😀
@ Thuziak i thiam ngei mai (Y) (Y) (Y)
May 25th, 2011 at 9:48 pm
A climax thleng silova han in sawngbawl chiam hi ka haw riau. (N)
May 25th, 2011 at 9:51 pm
Ka man lo tep. Dar 4:30 (tlai a nih ka ring) i nghak a. I nghak tih tur hre lo chuan i thianpa i phone a. Zana a message (message in inthawn hmasakna ber a nih hmel) i dawn thu i ziak leh ta mai bawk si a. A hmasa lo tur i dah hmasa a ang. A nih loh pawhin in inkawm tanna thu kha paragraph-a tan tur a ni ngei ang. A hma thu nen a inzawm zat sia, ka hrethiam lo dawn dawn a.
May 25th, 2011 at 9:53 pm
a va ngaihnawm teuh e, a tawi mah2 anih hi male
May 25th, 2011 at 10:00 pm
A tawp dan hi ngaituah zui ngai atam hle mai,chutichuan rei vaklo kan inkawm hnu chuan kan induh tih lantir nan kanin fawp ta a, tih tal ziak tel la chuan ahlimawm deuh tur. Tiang tawng hi tamtak an awm ve ngei ang le.
May 25th, 2011 at 10:08 pm
ehem !!‘Hei hi em ni i in chu’… Ka harh kawk mai. Ka ringlo lutuk (Y) chuan ..han sawi zel phawt teh khai..komen tak2 hmain
May 25th, 2011 at 10:12 pm
Chhiar nuam tawk hle mai.. A hnu a in awm dan tur chu ngaihtuah peih te tan i ti deuh ni maw??
chuan @apost-tupa.. A khal tha em aw????
May 25th, 2011 at 10:12 pm
ka thrianpa ve chu tiang deuh hian an inhmu ve a, a lo hang dum bek lutuk a, a haw veleh a number a delete nghal 😀
May 25th, 2011 at 10:21 pm
Cecilia Chong(23) of Churachandpur chu Nigerian mi Mr.Nwayo-a’n a that….. tih message ka dawng a, hrechiang in awm em?
May 25th, 2011 at 10:25 pm
Tha hle mai. Tun dinhmun ah chuan sorkar lai mek, inthlan hma a mipui te an vip tur a min sawihmuh tu ten vip anga min en hun ka nghakhlel zawk daih. Mipui te hi kan rethei mai pawh a ni lo, kan chawh.
May 25th, 2011 at 10:32 pm
#16 hisap kal thui lai2 a … ekhai ! hriatchian deuh avan thra em :-O
May 25th, 2011 at 10:43 pm
Ka puar hman hleinem le post tupa.
May 25th, 2011 at 10:59 pm
Kei pawh a post tupa tawn ang hi ka tawng ve tawh a, hit lo duh ras. Mahse, threnkhat chu hetiang atranga intawng, nupa inkawp rem tak lo ni ta pawh sawi tur ka hre nual. MIRC lar vanglai atrang khan a hluar chhoin ka hria. ASL please… kan tih thrin lai kha a ngaihawm in ti ve em?
May 26th, 2011 at 12:29 am
#10 @tuaisiala. Uluk takin ka chhu ve a sin mawle, a rawn chhuah hian ka chhut ang ni miah lo, parakraf te che ka ti ve thlap.. Admin ho in an review sual a niang?!!
#12@tatua hnamte.. Ka sawi/ziah thui lutuk chuan in ngaih bel an awm palh ang!
14@coolrider.. A khal bawn tawp.
19@CFL.. Kan la in hlui teuh dawn nia..
May 26th, 2011 at 9:22 am
A ngaihnawm tawp hmuk mai a… Eng tik nge a chhunzawmna “Zan ngahhlel awm” a chhuah leh ang le.. 😀
May 26th, 2011 at 11:10 am
hahahah hetiang avanga innei ta pawh ka hria.. Phone tang chuan inbiak tui tak tak hma in inhmuh vat a finthlak ber 😀 😀