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pOme

September 24th, 2006 1:55 pm by zualtei

First date
Darkened theatre,
Moving scences,
Holding on with heart-warmed hands.

Last date
Railway station,
Moving masses,
Letting go as our tomorrow ends.

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5 Responses to “pOme”

  1. 1
    Goldmember Says:
    September 25th, 2006 at 1:47 pm

    ka shtyle i la..

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    dear_diary Says:
    September 25th, 2006 at 4:10 pm

    A nalh i ti. Notice how almost nothing rhymes. Shows how modern I am. okie?

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    Goldmember Says:
    September 25th, 2006 at 4:28 pm

    i know must the new age style of poetry
    long time each line of a poem had to end in something like Pain Rain Drain Stain Cain Train
    and the rain would always wash away the pain

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    krisp_minx Says:
    September 25th, 2006 at 8:36 pm

    that sounds like a long goodbye…. ur good man!! u described a whole love story in just a few words.

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    tiger Says:
    September 27th, 2006 at 9:24 pm

    actually it is a very good , albeit very brief, poem. thanks

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