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   Goldmember Says:
   September 25th, 2006 at 1:47 pm

   ka shtyle i la..

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   dear_diary Says:
   September 25th, 2006 at 4:10 pm

   A nalh i ti. Notice how almost nothing rhymes. Shows how modern I am. okie?

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   Goldmember Says:
   September 25th, 2006 at 4:28 pm

   i know must the new age style of poetry
   long time each line of a poem had to end in something like Pain Rain Drain Stain Cain Train
   and the rain would always wash away the pain

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   krisp_minx Says:
   September 25th, 2006 at 8:36 pm

   that sounds like a long goodbye…. ur good man!! u described a whole love story in just a few words.

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   tiger Says:
   September 27th, 2006 at 9:24 pm

   actually it is a very good , albeit very brief, poem. thanks

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