‘So’… this is just another word, ever wonder what this two-lettered word could do? I didn’t think so… well this was what began this so called love story. She went home with a number added to her contacts list that day… It wasn’t long after she reached home that she received this two-lettered word from the new number…after awhile her phone beeped again with a message from the same number…only this time it had more than just “so”… it said “So, can I see you again?”.
From then on they began sending texts everyday until they finally met and found each other very compatible, they loved being with each other and would spend hours talking on the phone, sometimes their batteries would run out … she thought they had it all, the perfect couple… so she thought.
Time went by and the magic was fading slowly. No matter what she did, she felt him slipping away… she gave him all she had and tried all she could to restore the magic they had between them. She couldn’t do it on her own so she asked him to take the lead and she followed whichever path he took.
The road he chose wasn’t so smooth and the bumps on the road became rougher with every step, she began chasing pavements to avoid them while he walked on that bumpy and rough road alone without looking back at her who was trying to keep up with his pace, which was hard to do because he was also trying to avoid the rough road and took such long strides and leaps that she got way behind him… She called out to him but he had already gone too far to neither hear her calls nor pay heed to her… that was when she realized he had learned to walk alone and all she could do was to just watch him walk away.
She could no longer follow him as she couldn’t see him and with a simple twist of fate, she didn’t even see that he had changed his path. She wandered alone, lost in the world she thought she knew so well, lost in her thoughts thinking what if he would turn back… what if she hadn’t asked him to take the lead… ‘What ifs’ are all she has now… to this day she would hold her cell and stare blankly at the screen wishing her cell would beep and light up again with a text from him.
If so, I wonder if she would still feel the same spark like the time he first texted her… what if she can still say “U had me at So..”
Similar Posts:
- Tracking Your Lost Phone
- To a Dove [pLeAsE rEaD iT]
- Don’t wear ID cards out of the campus!
- “HOPE”
- Unlock a car with mobile phone
(Y)
April 1st, 2010 at 9:24 am
so what!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 9:29 am
Well written!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 9:39 am
Dear gail!! ka va khawngaih che em. Nangma thawnthu a nih ngei kan ring ngawt a, i ziak thiam hle mai. Hmangaihna tluantling lo hi tawrh hrehawm an ti thin reng a sin!!!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 9:49 am
tichuan…. ?
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 10:07 am
Engtin zel?
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 10:08 am
tichuan maw, a hman leh hmasak berah a rawn ziah zawm leh ang chu… kan lo ngaichang reng ang chu.
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 10:23 am
So… Carry on :!:
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 11:16 am
SO tih a bul tan top ai chuan HI emaw HELLO tih vel emaw in tan ta zok se chuan same path same pace la ni thei mai lovang mo le…..
Tak2 a na i jiak thiam hle mai a……a ron text duh toh si lo che a,mi(sual).com a ron chhiar ve ngei ringin desperate takin i han beisei leh vel nimo!!??…..
Eeehh….a ni chiang mai….
April fooolll !!!!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 11:38 am
So….. what????
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 11:41 am
Desperately seeking missing lover!!!!!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 11:41 am
sounds familiar…but coins have two sides. Gail if this is really your story, try to really look from his side
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 12:28 pm
I m so sory Gail,i am the one whom you are talking about.I tried to call you for several times,but i dare not for what i have done to you.If SO,i will call you again and lets start over again….April Fool. :lol:
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 12:43 pm
So tih hi a Sarkari tawngkam ve ngawt mai, Hotuten kan sawi tawp apianga So an lo tih hian a ngeiawm duh mai mai
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 12:59 pm
Van damme chu April Fool denchhena insawi luh i tum chiang mai
Hmanah pawh kan thianpa pakhatin nula tam deuh hnenah ‘Chhelo ka ti lutuk che a’ tih msg a thawn kual vak a, a rawn thinrim deuh hnenah kha chuan April Fool a ti jeih :lol:
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 1:45 pm
Nghak leh tang tang rih mai rawh, a rawn SO leh hrim hrim ang
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 2:04 pm
‘People tell me its a sin
To know and feel too much within
I still believe she was my twin
But I lost the ring
She was born in Spring
But I was born too late
Blame it on a simple twist of fate’
Simple Twist of Fate by Bob Dylan
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 4:17 pm
Dear gail hla ka thlan sak ang che, i lo sa veng veng thin dawn nia!!!!…
Lung zawng a leng thin e ‘D’ then chu,
Ngaiin ka au thin kawpten lenlai ni,
Mahse khuarei hian min hnem zela,…
………………………….
I duh leh nunhlui chu ngai zawk la,
Kei zawng min thik phak ta lo…..
ti ve thung tawh mai rawh!!!!!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 4:41 pm
So leh whatever hi thumal tlahawlh tak niin ka hre ve thin mai mai.
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 5:39 pm
thank you all so much for taking time to read it and leaving ur comments, it doesnt stop here..there’s a sequel to this.. i hope u’d enjoy reading that too. sorry to disappoint you but its not my life story, it’s only a story but say…it could happen to someone..if you can relate yourself to this story..i hope i didnt sprinkle salt in your wound..
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 5:41 pm
“Empty word” they call it so.
‘So’ persuades on to a ‘so so’; but, a seldom ‘so so’! :roll:
Salt, the best cure for me so! Well spun tale, it’s quite so so!
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 9:35 pm
gail hi k star ta reau mai.! ziak tha rem2 khop mai! Keicu..”CHUAN” ka ti thin..
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 9:51 pm
thil thleng thei ani tlat,,,tiro gail
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 10:21 pm
nithei ltk ang, kan chunga thleng tura kan ruat leh dawn ngamloh te pawh a tleng thina..he thil hi a thleng miahlo ang tih poh soi theih loh
Report this comment
April 1st, 2010 at 11:20 pm
tiang chu ka chung ah chuan thleng ve lo hram se k ti khop mai…..
Report this comment
April 2nd, 2010 at 4:17 am
So…Dis City girl seems to find out to late,wat if she went back from where she came home,just to try another luck..and could said Hi…just to say another Bye,and might one more time could feel the same spark like the time he first texted her !!!
Report this comment