Vangkhaw daiah ka tawng hmeltha.
Sakruang vur iang, bahsam sei hniang.
Chim loh tuktin par iang a tha,
Cho loh a ni, kei ka tan zawng.
An ka biakzai rel lo ten maw.
Min liamsan e tluanglam rawnah.
‘Sakhmel tawnni her leh ang maw’
Tiin ka dawn, thinlai rukah.
Sakhmela’n zawng rual a khum e,
Leng tin tan pawh mawina a ni.
Tu’n an chhing lo’ng khuavang note,
Duhawm tawpthang, hneh tu a ni.
Khuavel zauah a ni kha zawng,
Vul mawlh teh se, a dam chhung zawng.
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:02 pm
Vangkhaw dai ah tawng loin, vangkhaw laiah tawn tur che a lawm le.
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:04 pm
Aw hmeltha aw hmeltha, Cheu cheu…..
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:05 pm
vanlalsailova hla kha rilru ah lo lang daih
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:11 pm
” Ka hmangaih ber leh ka enchim loh nuimawite,
I hmangaih biahthu min lo hlan ve la;
Awm khawhar suihlunglen hi a nêm ve mahna,
Ka thinlai rûk duhaisam a kim ngei ang.”
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:12 pm
a tawp dan khi dek nalh khawp mai “vul mawlh teh se” tih lai tak khi
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:15 pm
beauty is subjective
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June 10th, 2011 at 11:37 pm
Shakespearean sonnet hi kan uar ta viau mai. Sonnet rhyme scheme leh metre hi Mizotawng chuan a har ka ti. Mizo sonnet hi siam chhuah ve mai ka duh a ni
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June 11th, 2011 at 12:15 am
Hlahril hi engtinngemaw in phuah zung2 theih mai bik le. A tha khawp mai.
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June 11th, 2011 at 12:20 am
Tha hle mai: sonnet hi phuah nuam tak a ni lo khawp mai mizo poem ka en vang vanga ka sawisel deuh thin chu Rhyme lai tak hi a ni. Word hmasa Rhyme leh tura rhyme thei tur kan dap vak anga lang fo hi mit timim lai tak a ni fo.(ka sawi chhan che ni lovin)
i hlaah hian a hmasa hlawm hnih leh a hlawm tawp ber hi tha ka ti khawp mai-hlawm thumna erawh chu ka’n zulh mai mai(min hrethiam la) “Leng tin tan pawh mawina a ni.”
He lai tlar hi Zikpuii pa’n ‘ a mawi mai a ni lo amah kha mawina a ni(Nunna kawngthuampuiah)’ a tih nen khan a inzul dawnin ka hria a, mahse ‘Lengtin tan’ tih i dah hmasa khian sawifiah a titul deuh a,sawi fiah chuan kawng bo tak phei chu a ni lo;amah kha sawi mawlh mawlh la a fuh dawn nen. Mi dang i la lut kher a.
“Tu’n an chhing lo’ng khuavang note,
Duhawm tawpthang, hneh tu a ni.”
Hnehtu han hman daih khian a tiulh-in i hre ve tho em?
Sawifiahna chi hnihah chuan ‘chhing’ tih i hman avangin hnehtu i hmang a ni maithei. Duhawm tawp thang tih sawi fiah lehzualna pawh a ni thei-englekhawle hnehtu han hman daih ai chuan i thiam tho si a, a dang mawi zawk hman tur i hre ngei ang.(ka suggest lovang).
Lastly, hla tlar tawpa(sonnet) pawh ni se ‘a ni’ hman hi a prosaic khawp mai tawngkam tluang tlam takah a chang awl em em a, chhiar pawhin a hla thu duh lo khawp mai.
Anyway, i thiam a, i phuah tha bawk…tluk loh i ni.
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June 11th, 2011 at 12:56 am
khuavang note, ka duh beu beu
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June 11th, 2011 at 12:59 am
Post tupa chu i ril hle mai, sonnet lam hi chu engmah ka hre ve der lo mai! Tuina lam hi a danga, He lampang a phuah leh ziah hi tilo mah ila. Ngaihthlak lam-ah erawh chuan, nawm chu ka ti ve thin, Khabe sep thiam zingah chuan i tel chiang e! good post,
a tawpa ‘a ni’ ti lo khian ‘ani’ han ti la, a dik lehzual ngei ka beisei. thu leh hla a la tawp lo tlat!
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June 11th, 2011 at 2:02 am
Hmu chiang bawk maw!
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June 11th, 2011 at 6:13 am
A tawp chang khi a tawi bik tlat kan phuahbelh teh ang.
Aw ka dawnchiang ngam lul love,
Ka tel lova i rai tur hi.
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June 11th, 2011 at 12:14 pm
phuloh hi chu a awmve deuh a ni
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