Vul lo tura par kei ka hringnun,
Hnuchhawn run iang ngui ruai hi,
Vang leh chhan awm maw hlimzai rel nan?
Hringmi zingah hrilh theih chang se,
Piallei zau hrut vel ka nuam;
Mahse beidawn khua sei chuang ka tan,
Van mi iang nunnem angel ngei khan,
Hnemin buan ang min pawm se aw!
Angel ka ngai
Angel ka ngai
Van mi iang nunnem ka tan angel kha,
Pualleng thlangthla an sawi iang kir rel lo kha,
Tualvung lungdi ka tahkhua sei nan-
Ko thiam awm nem maw vangkhaw liana’n;
Runah riangte’n duhthuleng sam zelin,
Khuanu dil na’ng angel nghilh zai rel nan,
Angel nghilh zai rel nan.
(NB: He hla hril hi Lengzem March 2012 issue ah khan a chhuak tawha. Tunlai politics boruak, Euro, khawlum leh vawt in lumlet vel kara rilru lak pen lawk nan ka rawn post ve leh mai mai a ni, a ‘mood’ a cheng vak lo tan chuan a ho viau maithei, mahse a phuahtunu hi a lungleng em a ni, hrethiam teh u )
June 26th, 2012 at 9:08 pm
Kan Charice-i post a nih manah 1st phot ang.
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June 26th, 2012 at 9:23 pm
A pawi ngei e, kan lenna tlang
A hrang, kan chhui mahni lamtluang.
Sakhmel intawng lovin sakhming kan chhiar.
A rel silo khuanu’n pian mur khuahmun tura’n,
Rel nawn leh se khua hmun tura’n,
Ka phal law’ng che riang thlawn tura’n.
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June 26th, 2012 at 9:30 pm
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June 26th, 2012 at 9:55 pm
Lengzema ka chhiar hnu ka han ti mai dawn a, nangmahin min sawikhalh ta zâwk a.
A ṭha phian.
Sawmtei Chawngthu phuah angin a inziak.
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June 26th, 2012 at 9:56 pm
Post tunu hi chu a ‘cial’ ani..
Hrechiang phei ila_ ka mi ngaihsan chi tak anih ka ring
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:03 pm
Chhiar a nuam dap dap hle mai
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:04 pm
kim… khi lai khi a va mawi ve…Sakhmel intawng lovin sakhming kan chhiar.
charice: a mam tha thluam2 ve….
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:05 pm
“Oh oh oh, you’re my Angel” tih arem ve tawh siloh takah chuan. “When i lay down to sleep, let your Angel watching over me my Lord Jesus” ka ti zawk mai tang e.
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:11 pm
Ava’n nalh zeih zawih vele hairehai
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:14 pm
shaggy hla “girl you’re my angel, you’re my darling angel” tih kha ka rilru ah lo lang daih. kan duh ve thei rass
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:31 pm
nia.. Kan hriat duh kan hre reng thei tlat lo te, kan theihnghilh duh ngawih2 kan theihnghilh theih tlat si loh te…
Kei pawh hman ni deuh khan fb an tih ah hian ka hriat reng duh tawh loh, ka theihnghilh phal chiah bawk si loh nen kan intawng leh a.. Nupui fanau mut reh ah patling pui hian ka chal ka dawm leh vung2 thin..haha..
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June 26th, 2012 at 10:40 pm
# haha a hrehawm duh asin tiang hi
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:08 pm
Hriat loh kan zawng;
Rin loh kan tawng.
Duh duh kan chhu;
Tum loh kan hmu,
Then khat a hlu..
Tih lam pang poetry thar[hla uang…chiah lo..] ka neih phah.. A rem leh ka la rawn post ang..haha..
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:15 pm
@ saint, tha dawn lutuk, chuan thil pakhat:
Misuala ka poetry rawn post ve tawh te hi tuman in faksel (sel a ni zawk mah ang chu criticise ang hi lol) ngailo reng reng, in ril hlawm tehlul nen, ngatinge??
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:16 pm
Ka kawmen a lut thei lo saaala, ka phuah ve nasat sat nen
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:19 pm
Lut ve chiah, smiley khi zawk tur, lol
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:21 pm
van zialo ve CC-te, nghak deuh la, chuan rawn ti tha leh hram hram mai la aw i fel kha
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:22 pm
thy will be done..
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:26 pm
A va tha ve aw.. Chhiar a kal zaih mai
tren tren
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:28 pm
kei pawh a lut tha duh lo ltk. Ka fone hman hi emaw ni te ka tia.. A chang leh mobile version ten a lut a, log in rawh a ti chhen mai leh nghal,haha..
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:29 pm
Mood off tawh
I phuah nalh khawp mai
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:31 pm
thank Q, keipawh zanin chu ka mood a off tlat
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:46 pm
In faksel duh lo a ti a, khawnge ka’n faksel mai mai teh ang.
A phuahtu rilru ka hre lo va, a hlarua hrim hrim hi han sawisel em em tur ka hre lo, un tak hman i tum hran lo bawk a-mahse…
chang hmasaah hian “min pawm se aw’ ti vawng vawng khawpin i ngai a, a thunawnah pawh confi hawi lek lekin ‘ka ngai’ ti malh malh tawh a..
chang hnihna bul lamah phei chuan “van mi ianga nunnem” ti khawpin i hlimpui a, mahse a zuitu chu mizo idiom negative conontation “puallenga thlangtla” in i rawn chham hnan a, chutah Tualvungiah inchanin amah han ko hawng tur i dap deuh ruai tawh a…tichuan
khati khawpa van rim nam rum rum khawpa i sawi tawh lalnunnem-a(i) kha a tawpah “nghilh zai rel” duhin i tawngtai ta hlup hlup mai hian …hmangaihna chawitu rinawmna a va kheuh hawng pha lo em!!
A saka sak tur ni se, chang hnihna tlar tawp sak zawh hian a thunawnah lut dawn ila, a va intu lo deuh dawn ta ve…
AA, i phuah thiam lutuk.
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:48 pm
Charice’s mood :
A : On
B : A
C : B
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:51 pm
connotation
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June 26th, 2012 at 11:52 pm
Angil ka ngai
Angil ka ngai… tih niawm tak a nia, a thu a han.mawikual nen, piallei zau ah hian Angel leh Tualvung len dun a rem dawn em ni? tiin ka rawn sel e
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June 27th, 2012 at 12:14 am
hahaha #23 vakul, i rawn point out thiam hle mai, midang phuah ni ta se keipawn khi chiah khi ka rawn sawi ve tho ang. Mahse han chhiar chiang leh deuh ta la, puallenga thlang tla mizoin kan tih chu eng ang nge tih i hria anga, reh hmak, chanchin engmah hriat tur awm tawh reng reng lo sawina…a ni a. Chumi ngaia lungleng tawngkhawng awmngaihna hrelo mangangin Pathian hnenah theihnghilh a dil ta mai a ni tih i hmu thiam ang..lolz ka inpuang zo takngial dawn, insum te’ng..a saka sak tur a ni lo bawka, hei tak hi poem leh hla danglamna chu a ni…kei chuan poem hi ril ka ti zawk..hehe
#26 vaiva, angel hi metaphor a ni e, mihring, nula leh tlangval inngaihzawnna a tehkhinna a hman atan chuan a ‘common’ vak lo maithei, mahse chu chu a tum tak zawk chu a ni. Tualvungi lo lang ve zawk pawh hi Cleopatra te, Thelma te ai chuan mizo hlachham a nih manah tehkhinna a hman atan a inhmeh ka rinzawk vang a ni lol. Angel nena inrem tur mizo tawngah ngaihzawng te sawina tawngkam a vang khawp mai
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June 27th, 2012 at 12:35 am
charice ka hrethiam lutuk, la ngaihven em em, mahse thawm a rawn neih tak loh avanga Pathian hnena a tana tha tur zawk nia hriaa theihnghilh dil(thei tak tak si lo) a nih chu…
lungngai suh a lo haw leh hunah i lo tihuam lovang a, nangmahah khan a lal ber tawh lo tih lo show la, a bulah awm tam dan ngaihtuah ru reng siin…kha leh chen lo no.1 ngar ngar tawh chuan no.2,3,4, a ni thiam dawn miah lo. i lo tih leh huam chuan a khuangcher bo ang.
i phuah thiam lutuk, Zirsangzela hla “Lawm zel ta’ng e” nen khan a inzul deuh a, kha pawh khan hmangaihtu rilrua theih miah loh “hlimten i len chuan lawm zel ta’ng e” a ti ve ringawt a nih kha. Nang chuan Angel i hmang a, pakhatah chuan “Thuva” ianga zaidam nunnem…
i hla hi complicate lo rual a ni lo, i tawn a complicate em a ni. i rilru pawh a insual a, i theih loh kha i tum a, i huat ruk kha i ko nem em em a, i duh ruk kha theihnghilh i tum lawi a, hmangaihna hian min hnuk kual kawi hlawm ve chiang.
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June 27th, 2012 at 1:07 am
@ vakul, ni ngawt mai ti raw, ka lawm e, min fuihna hi ka vawng reng ang..
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June 27th, 2012 at 9:16 am
# 23, 27 & 28… Ti ngawt mai te’ng. Sawi tur ka hre lova, in sawi erawh a ril…
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June 27th, 2012 at 3:38 pm
Khaia……………angel han teh khin mai chuh, in an loh theih dawn ve . Mahse literary values ang zawnga en chuan exageratted an tih ngei a rinawm critic ho chuan …………(Y)
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June 27th, 2012 at 5:01 pm
Aw hmangaihna khawvel en t’u.
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June 27th, 2012 at 6:03 pm
1. A chang bul ber atang hian kan sel chhin ang e “Vul lo tura par” tih ngawt hi? Pangpar nen kan hringnun tehkhin a ni fo thin, mi an vanglai tak hi Pangpar par vullai nen hlaah tehkhin a ni fo. Tuktin par tak ngial pawh a vul chhung rei lo mahse Solomona thuam famkim ai pawhin a la mawi zawk si a. Chuvangin Vul lo tura par hi a awm thei dawn em ni? Zirsangzela chuan “Vullai ka vul ve love” a ti thung a….len lai rual lo sawi nan a hmang ve thung.
2. “Angel ka ngai” han tih teh lawng hi a tluang tlam deuh lo maw..? Ngai sawi nan “I zun zamin min phuar” emaw “I zunah ka uai” emaw “I zun ka phur” emaw “Zun ai ang vial” emaw “I zun ngai”, ladt. hmang ta zawk la a….?
3. Vangkhaw lian hi Vangkhaw zau ti zawk la….hla thuah hian khua lian hle mahse zau hi kan hmang tlangpui. Piallei zau i hmang ang deuh khian.
Kan sel takna in i phuah thiam khawp mai, tawng upa han zeh zeuh hian hla thu hi a kuai lungrun thei bik ngawt a sin.
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June 27th, 2012 at 9:10 pm
lushai_er….i ti lawmawm e, i rawn criticise ve duha..sawidan leh interpret dan tam tak a awm thei, mahse ti hian ka’n hrilhfiah law law ang e..
1) ‘vul lo tura par’ tih hi mizo tawngkamah hmanna a la awm lova, chumi hrereng chung chuan ka hmang lui ngat a ni. A awmzia chu pangpar ah mahni inchanin a rawn par chhuak ve ngeia, mahse a parmawina kha a hmangaih berin a hlutpui si loh avangin ‘vul’ mawi ve niin a inhre lova, tin beisei a neih tawhloh avangin a nun a kulcho zo tawh, a vulmawi ve tak tak tawh dawnlo..tih lam sawina a ni.
2) He poem hi mizo poem dang nen a inanglo tih chu ka thu hman duhdan hrim hrim atang hian i hmuh ka ring, sawi tawpah chuan i zunzamin min phuar etc i rawn sawi ho khi chu tawng upa kan hman zin leh tlanglawn ber ber te an ni, chuvangin ka hmang peih lo he poem bikah hi chuan, tin a poem kalphung a ti dang vek ang* (a ti common bawk ang). He hla thua a climax chu ‘Angel ka ngai’ tih hi a ni a, a intensity ti zual tur leh supernatural effect* angreng pe turin tluangtlam si, belhchiana takna leh thukna hlira khat anih theih zawk nan ‘Angel ka ngai’ ka ti ta a ni, vawihnih ka sawi nawn kher hi.
3) ka hmanna hmunah khi chuan zau tih aiin lian tih inhmeh ka ti zawk..ka lawm e
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