Together we can do

June 27th, 2012 3:00 pm by dustin sampler14

Like a swarm of bees
Soaring up in the deep sky with the same tone,
Like the village cattles grazing on the meadow.
Like the lilies merriy shaking in the north wind,
If we join our hands,
Toil and moil to grip the rope of unity,
Together we will shine!
Brighter than the midday sun,
Stronger than the leopard.
Tears and empty hands would be the tales for our sons,
Pain and empty hands will vanished like a seasonal bird,
That sings just for a symbol.

Bread and knowledge will be in all hands,
Together we can do
If we raised our voice
For Love to reign,
And flow together in unity,
Like the wax that melts and the wick that burn,
For the candle to give a light,
Our wounded hands and bleeding legs will give a light.
And slowly and smoothly evil will flee,
And to that city where the sun will never set,
Forever we will shine!

13 Responses to “Together we can do”

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Mx Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 3:08 pm
LIKE
FIRST
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sheldon Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 3:50 pm
A tha ka ti. Kei hi chuan tlar khat pawh ka phuah ve thiam love
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Dr Mahminga Sailo Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 3:56 pm
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lrpa Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Tha viau tur ah ngai the ang! A nalh hmel ka ti khawp mai, expert ho in han analyze teh se..
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Sandman Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 5:30 pm
Very nice…
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Sandman Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 5:40 pm
Chuan constructive criticism tlem aw? Grammatical mistake tlem a awm a, awm lo se chu chhiar a nuam leh zual deuhvang…

Entirnan,

Like the wax that melts and the wick that burn (burns)

Tears and empty hands would be the tales for our sons,
Pain and empty hands will vanished like a seasonal bird,
(tense hman pawlh)

Pain and empty hands will vanished (vanish) like a seasonal bird,

Like the lilies merriy (merrily) shaking in the north wind

If we raised our voice
(Heta pawh a tense hi present ni tur zawk a ni hmel)
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Dr Mahminga Sailo Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 5:44 pm
# 6… Ti leh mai te’ng..
merriy (merrily) chiah khi ka lo hmu, chu lah sipel diklo ringawt…
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dustin sampler14 Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 6:17 pm
@Sandman, ‘burn’ tih leh ‘merriy’ tih hi chu spelling mistake a ni e. Chuan, ka careless lutuk avangin tense pawh a dik lo zeuh zeuh mai. -ed (past tense), present tense hmanna turah ka hmang zeuh zeuh mai. Ka tihsual a ni e.

Thankz for the criticism…
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Sandman Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 6:21 pm
No problem, dustin. Keipawh ka thil ziah sual chu ka thianten min rawn hrilh zel a, kan improve phah zel a lawm
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dustin sampler14 Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 6:30 pm
@Sandman, hei hi 1st Yr. ka nih laia college magazine a ka ziah a ni a, English literature a sang pui pui te pawh khan an lo hmu bik miah lo niin ka hria. Khami tuma ka ziah bak kha ka chhiar nawn leh tawh lova, ka rawn paste tawp a, alo dik lo nuai lehnghal anyway, thanks
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Charice_mizo Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 9:20 pm
Nice one
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Sasaks Says:
June 27th, 2012 at 11:50 pm
Tha fu ni! Tense hi mi tam tak weak point ania. Inzir nan hang zel ila. ‘Would’ leh ‘will’ pawh hi….a ‘confi’ deuh khan han sawi teh u
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malsta27 Says:
June 28th, 2012 at 2:57 pm
Clause i va hmang thiam ve lo ti ve ngot . Lrpa sawi ang deuh khian nalh viau turah ngai phawt ang.