Don’t Cry

April 28th, 2010 11:45 am by coolsoul09

Looking at the lifeless body lying next to him, his memory flashed back at the past. The first time they met and the night she told him that she would love him till she dies. The completeness he felt when he was with her, the beautiful smiles filled with love and dedication, the sounds of her laughter were the most beautiful music to his ears. He remembered the way he felt when he held her in his arms and kissed her. But, now, as he watched her fade away, tears were rolling down on his cheeks, and as the unstoppable pain surged through his very being, someone said, “ Don’t cry”.

Lying all alone in her bed, she saw him in her mind’s eyes. She could see the very lips that had whispered promises to her, and the promises he said to her rang through her head. She covered her ears so as to stop hearing those empty promises which were still ringing in her ears. She saw her life before her and it was impossible to forget him, cruel as he was. She clenched her fist and hit the pillow, self pity hit her like a strong winter hurricane. She hated herself for being so ignorant a girl. She then felt the baby moved in her womb. She could not see what future holds for her and then she cried, but a voice was saying, “Don’t you cry”.

For a twelve years old boy, it was difficult to accept the reality. He held out the picture of a beautiful woman which he had been holding against his heart, and looked into her eyes and whispered, “Mom, why did you leave me ?”. Someone told him that his mom must have been in heaven, singing and praising the Lamb. But, he did not understand such a complex belief. For, a boy like him who had nobody else to call his own, it was impossible to face the raging world without his mom.

Had she been there with him, they would have been in the Carnival on a day like that day. But, he knew that things would never be the same again. He looked out from the window and saw stars which were scattered all over the sky and wondered where heaven might be. It was for nobody to understand what he was going through and what was on his mind. As he was watching the stars, he embraced her picture and cried. Someone then touched his shoulder and whispered, “Don’t cry”.

The last time they heard about him was from one of their neighbors who said that he met him in a tavern, about a thousand miles from their home town. He said that their son looked so pale and thin that it would be quite easy to mistake him for a ghost. Yes, he had been their hero, the very reason of their existence. They never disappointed him nor denied him of what he wanted. They had been cherishing him and waiting for him to grow up, but when he finally did they wished that he had never grown up and remained the little sweet boy who ran around in the courtyard. They wondered where their only son might be at that moment.

There were hundreds of questions on their minds, to which they knew not an answer. So they knelt down in front of the crucifix, holding each other’s hand, humbled by the pain they were going through. As they were pouring out their hearts, tears were streaming down on their cheeks. Then, they heard a voice, saying, “Don’t cry”.

So dear, please do not cry.

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39 Responses to “Don’t Cry”

  1. 1
    mi_sual Says:

    Very good

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  2. 2
    van damme Says:

    my tears running down my cheeks….huh huh huh…

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  3. 3
    lrlawma Says:

    я не понимаю!Sap tawng ni ee mai…tha turah ngai phawt ang… :P

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    funny Says:

    lrlawma chu a russian tawng thiam a rawn in show off leh tawh animaw… :P

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  5. 5
    lrlawma Says:

    :lol:

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    Sandman Says:

    Tlem in min ti confusion deuh :) He, she, they, tih vel khi mi hran hran an nih hmel sia, “He” tih khi naupang nge a pa zawk, leh 12 years old i tih khi hmeichhia pum chhunga nausen rawn thang lian tawh nge, a fapa dang (a upat hnu ni awm tak a nia, mahse things will never be the same i tih chuan a fapa dang zawk ni awm tak a ni leh bawk sia) nge achangtupa naupang lai flashback? Chuan, first para ah “staring at her lifeless body” i tia, second para ah “lying all alone in her bed” i tih hi he nu tho a ni em? Chuan a tawp bera “they” te khi tu te ve thung nge? :) Chronology lamah tlem in ka man lo deuh hret. But very well written in terms of flow and expression.

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    funny Says:

    saptawng hi tun thleng hian kala thiam vaklo tlatmai keichu.

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  8. 8
    chhangte_ll Says:

    US lama members ten han letling se, chuti lo chu Pu Buanga leh Pu JF te Dictionary nilenga keu a ngai leh dawn tlats :( Sydney of Aryan lehlin pawh a pawi chuang lo :D

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    ^-||RaLtE||-^ Says:

    Nia…. He, she, they v el hi han soi chiang teh Pu cool… Keini sap tawng hre ve eih2 tan chuan bauina a ti tam tlat!

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  10. 10
    gothica Says:

    i copy paste nge nangma ziah…

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    coolsoul09 Says:

    sawichianna : :)
    “Don’t Cry” tih a awm chiah khian, a thawnthu khi a tawp zel tihna :)

    Chuan a tawpah, harsatna chi hrang hrang tawkte khi, “So dear, please do not cry” ka ti ta a..a chiang em aww ??

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  12. 12
    ^-||RaLtE||-^ Says:

    E…. chiang ta e…. Ngatinge So dear i tih leh kher??? (Dilchhut vel awm!!!) :-D

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  13. 13
    Johnroyte Says:

    Nuihtur nge trahtur,miin tv ahte english fiamthu anrawnthawh hian kanuih aza vengailo….achhanchu a awmzia ka hretlat lo…1 aiin 2 atam.

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  14. 14
    coolsoul09 Says:

    @gothica, keima ziak liau liau a ni e.

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    zualbonez Says:

    Dont cry- GNR maw kan tih chu…he he

    nway good one.

    the man loves the woman, the woman loves the man. He impregnated her, but then cheated on her. She knows bout it and in childbirth died cause she could not take the overwhelming pain… A young boy and his grandparents lead lives of loneliness while he takes solace in alcohol.

    kerh kerh lampang tho anih hi

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    coolsoul09 Says:

    @zualbonezzzz..i IMAGINATION a that phian hi maw le..lolz..beidawnna hmachhawn mi chi hrang hrang thawnthu niin i hre ve zawk lo maw ?? And then comes someone to console them. And this someone, to me is Christ himself..

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    Sandman Says:

    OOOOOOO…. Hrethiam ta e ti hi chuan :-)

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    zualbonez Says:

    @ coolsoul….”beidawnna hmachhawn mi chi hrang hrang thawnthu niin i hre ve zawk lo maw ?? “.
    ……ka pawm thlap….and this is the story, in different avatars, of all of us. We r all crying inside..(smile)

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    gothica Says:

    @coolsoul09…. i ziah that phian hi… adang rawn ziak leh la, mahse tlema structure awm deuhin mawle…

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  20. 20
    coolsoul09 Says:

    @gothica, ka lawm e.

    nia,han dam phawt ila..kan la ziak zel ang chu. Structure a nei tha phian emaw ka lo tia..Sandmana’n a rawn ngaihpawlh chiah khan a structure a mumal lo a ni tih ka hre ve chauh a…lol.. a chunga ka sawi ang khian, ‘Don’t Cry’ tih khi thawnthu tawi pakhat kharna zel a nia..chuan, a rawn titu khi Isua angah ka dah bawk a..ka han insawifiah a nih chu.

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  21. 21
    ^-||RaLtE||-^ Says:

    Comment a tam tulh2 a, ka hrechiang tulh tulh :-D

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  22. 22
    aduhi Says:

    a ziaktupa in a’n sawifiah takah chuan ka hrethiam ve deuh roh tan… ka lo bo angreng khawp mai a.

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  23. 23
    ^-||RaLtE||-^ Says:

    @aduhi: kan va in ang ve. :lol:

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    panuamsa Says:

    Don’t cry-tap suh,luaithli nuai suh,chhingmittui fartir suh.,..ahem! Thumal khat te te in rawn lehlin zel ka tum ang! A changtupa kha a nu ah a chang phawt a,chutah a nu leh pa an tap ta a…

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  25. 25
    evergreen Says:

    Mizo tawng nalh takin rawn let leh teh a, i ziak ngaihnawm thin khawp mai

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  26. 26
    gothica Says:

    @coolsoul… nia a hriatthiam theih maia ngaihruatna pawh min siam a, mahse theme hrang2a ngaihtuah ngaia hehe rawn sawi ta deuh duah sorry

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  27. 27
    Jewel Says:

    trong dang hi thiam ka nei ve lova, “Happy Birthday” tihna kha chu Russian trongin ka dawng ve ngei a, ka lo delete hman khanglang a, chuvangin in show off leh rih lo mei ang :-P

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    H.Vangchhia Says:

    Jewel, “S dnem rozhdeniya” a ni mai lawm ni ;) badboy, i piancham hlim takin i hmang ang chu maw :)
    chhangte_ll, #8 “Looking at the lifeless body lying next to him, his memory flashed back at the past.” tih te chu, a kianga mitthi mu khawng reng a thlir lai chuan, a dam laia a thil tih pui thin te chu a ngaihtuah let a, a dik em, han chhunzwm teh khai :P
    Mi pakhat pawh a zu in lo hawng chuan a pizawn a thi tih a hre ta a. A ruang an lo thut hual laih, an tah lai te an hmuh chuan hnemna thu tihian a chhak chhuak ta a. A puzawn dar a ben thak thak pah chuan, ” tha mai ang, tha mai ang,” a ti. A puzawn muang changa lehlam lo hawiin, ” a tha mai lo a nih hi….” a ti (fact) :(

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  29. 29
    badboy Says:

    #27@jewel: I tawng thiam Happy birthday tal khian ngati nge mi rawn hrilh loh a :lol: sual tuk mai ;)

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    Maisek Says:

    coolsoul, thawh tha thin hle mai! i thuziak a ngaihnawm ka ti thin khawp mai! nangni te, HV te, kawlhawk te etc. hian misual in ti hlu ani!

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  31. 31
    Jewel Says:

    @H.Vangchhia #28 ani takin ka hria..iva thiam em2!!
    @Badboy #29 Sorry… “S dnem rozhdeniya”!! :) i birthday lawm, kawngkual lam i haw hma ltk a, kan wish hmanlo che ani kha. Funny te ho pon wish che an tum a, an zawn vak2 che kha..

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    XaiA Says:

    And if there is no power supply and the net is down and no one could access misual.com… Don’t you cry baby :lol:

    Ngaihtuah thiam khawp mai,a ngaihnawm e.

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    muantea Says:

    Don’t cry ah a lo tawp zel a ni maw? A in relate angreng fu sia,mahse Sydney Sheldon style a han vuah rem leh dawn chuan a inchuk rem leh chiah mang si law, ka lo buai ve ngawt a. Mahse hrilhfiah fe hnuah chu ka inhlan thei e. A thu ai mah chuan a flow hian min khawih zawk.

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    H.Vangchhia Says:

    Jewel, Nikakih problem shef :D

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    funny Says:

    happy birthday badboy, please don’t cry. :lol:

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  36. 36
    Jewel Says:

    @H.Vangchhia thnx :) maseh badboy chuan FB lam a minla huk khum dum2 a..lolzz

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    coolsoul09 Says:

    A dang tichhuak leh chhin ang aw..rinaiin English pawh kan chhiar peih tho mai :D Thanks guys.

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    ^-||RaLtE||-^ Says:

    pu coolsoul: English-a thu i rawn post leh hunah chuan dictionary rawn zep tel tawh la ti nia. :-D

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    Jewel Says:

    @badboy #29 nimin khan ka lo hmu lova, hei ka phn pakhat zok a alo la om a lom..”S dnem dinrazhdinia. zhivite dolga” (Happy Birthday. May u live long). :lol: :lol: :lol:

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