Vangkhawpui tual I fang vel a,
Mipui tiau zat I tawh hnuin;
Tlawmngaihna reng I hmu lova,
I zawt chiama I hriat chhun chu;
Mipuiah bawk a tawp si thin,
A thang na a I tawng si lo;
Nunmawi vawngtu an er rawn kha.
Lenrual zingah I zawt vel a,
I hriat zawng zawng I zawh hnuin;
Chawimawina reng I hmu lova,
I zawng chiama I hmuh chhun chu;
Lenrual zingah a tawp si thin,
An hre renga an sawi si lo;
Midang tana thawk thintu kha.
Zaleng tawn a’n I hril vel a,
A ropuina an hriat hnuin;
Ngaisangtu reng I hmu lova,
I kawm chianga an hril ber chu;
Zaleng tawn a’n a tawp si thin,
An nuihzata an tluk si lo;
Leng zawng tana hruaitu tling kha.
Ropuina hi ka pek nise,
Mahse-mahse,mahse-mahse;
An mit lehlam an meng si lo.
Tunlai chu hetiang hla lam hi kan uar bawk a, ka’n ti ve chhin teh ang.
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October 7th, 2010 at 6:23 am
I phuah ami?
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October 7th, 2010 at 6:25 am
first ka tum sin le
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October 7th, 2010 at 7:44 am
Mit khing chhing :wink:
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October 7th, 2010 at 8:58 am
Tha fû mai.
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October 7th, 2010 at 9:30 am
Head light leh lam dim chu in va han ngaisang hlom ve.
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October 7th, 2010 at 9:37 am
ka mit leh lam ka meng lo a mi chu aw..
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October 7th, 2010 at 10:55 am
Meng tawia zuk ni ringawta
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October 7th, 2010 at 2:12 pm
tunlai chu hetiang lam hi a lang tlat. hei hi a tha khawp mai, chhiar a nuam. rawn ziak zel rawh.
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October 7th, 2010 at 3:17 pm
Iambic Tetrametre hmanga hla phuah tha tak zawng a ni e,
Mahse (mahse han tih hi ka inthlahrung deuh, opposition leader-ah min ngai palh ang) a metre chu dik mahse, a pawimawh zawk tak a flow a dik chiah lo deuh. A flow hi ngaih pawimawh zual nise hla tha leh awmze nei tak a tling ang.
Rhymme scheme mumal deuh tin zawn chungin, a metre ngaihtuah bawk siin, a thu hman tur remchang melh tel siin i phuah ngei ang a, i rilru buai lai vel tur ka hmu chak :smile:
A tawpna stanza tak hi i rilru rawn dawnpui i ngai khawp mai. Hmeichhia an ngawih reng chuan ‘Aw’ an ti tih ang deuhvin ‘mahse mahse mahse mahse’ khian awmzia zawng a nei ngei ang.
Han ti zel teh khai.
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October 7th, 2010 at 8:44 pm
A dik a ni, Zotawng hian kan ti thei a ni tih i ti chiang e, saptawng hausak bikna ngawt sawi hi a sawt lo, ti te khian i ti hausa phian a ni lawm ni Rokpupu… Bei zel teh khai….
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October 7th, 2010 at 9:00 pm
MI ah hian thiante hrilh hriatna zarah ka lut ve thin a, ka chhiar a inhnialna ho mai mai tih kual velna ah ka lo ngai thin. Mahse hei kan thlir tam deuha kutchhuak hial a tum khat nan ka pho chhuak ta, Muantea min comment na hi a ropui ka ti, a thahnemngaihna hi kan hre pha emaw, kei ka hmu tlat. Mahse (mahse tih hi a hrehawm) theihtawp han chhuah pawh hian flow, rhymme, a meter hi chu a har a ni. Tin ngaihdan tumtlang deuh ka nei a, ka lunglenna tarlan theih loh khawp a min phuartu hi awm lo se ka duh thin a, tu emaw danah ka Poetic Licence ka hmang a ni mai awm e a!
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