Tu’nge a thai tur chu hei zawng zingah,
Uai an tlem lua e, a tawnah ve hian;
Ngurnun chawilo rianghluan val runsangah,
Engtik’ mo lawm awm maw,a tar hma hian.
A tan Siamtu kutchhuak chhawrna awm lo,
Tumbu khaileng iangin a khaihil reng;
Hluihlawn nunna nei zingah a bang lo,
A tan chhawrthla’ eng pawh a mawi thlawn reng.
Incheina thar nen inthuam thin mahse,
Tuai ang a thar si lo a sakhmel chu;
Uaiin a zur zel, a pianmawina te,
Rei a nghak thlawn e, run lum pui tur chu.
Chhuihthangvalin fam a chan thleng pawhin,
Urlawk a awm thei lo, mo lawm turin.
(Rhyme Scheme:abab,cdcd,efef,gg.)
Dt.25th.April,2006
October 12th, 2010 at 4:49 am
Va thiam ve a…
In va comment duh lo ve aw.. Good Morning! (Ti ti ik ik…)
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October 12th, 2010 at 5:09 am
tuilen leh hma chu dam rawh, i thiam em mai
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October 12th, 2010 at 5:27 am
Tlukloh rim i nam.
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October 12th, 2010 at 5:33 am
STRIKE THR33 a rimtui em?
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October 12th, 2010 at 6:31 am
Va phuah thiam ve! Tlar tin bul tanna TUNGE A THAI TUR CHU. Ropui e
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October 12th, 2010 at 6:33 am
Acrostic hi chu ‘spontanuous overflow of inner feeling’ hi a ni mawh khawp! :wink: Engle khaw le, ka thih hunah Dr Laltluangliana Khiangte chuan samkhai deuhvin acrostic poem mi rawn khawrpumsak ve leh mai chuan ka ring, kei aia a dam rei chuan!
Tumbu khaileng iangin a khai hil reng;
He lai tlar hi sai pawhin hrethiam ve sela chu, “a nawn awmna a va fual,” a ti ngei ang! :lol:
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October 12th, 2010 at 6:40 am
Mumang nen chhia teng
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October 12th, 2010 at 8:14 am
Aw tluanga, tluangropui, i va han phuah thiam ve le..thiam ka ti tak zet che a ni..i khaihil em lo ang chu maw!..phuah zel rawh khai..
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October 12th, 2010 at 8:17 am
Tluanga, pawi i tih loh chuan a tlar hmasa pahnih hi hetiang hian han khawih danglam hret ta la…tiin ka han rawt chhin ve mai mai:
Tu’nge a thai tur chu leng zawng zingah
Uai an tlem lua e, a zunah ve hian…
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October 12th, 2010 at 8:53 am
A va han khawngaihthlak ve le, a then te lah chuan an thlak zut mai bawk si a…
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October 12th, 2010 at 9:28 am
Thiam hle mai
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October 12th, 2010 at 9:43 am
Khawngaihtu leh lainattu avan ruai a ni maw.
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:03 am
A va mawi ropui ve le. Poet tha tak i ni ka ti che. Tawl mai a.
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:17 am
Tumbu khaileng iangin engmaw a khai ?!!!
Mahse a la beidawng lo.
Min va rawn khei deuh ve.. Saala !!!
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:29 am
Shakespeara’n sonnet ngat maw, a tha khawp mai.
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:39 am
Ku Chawnghilh leh Pu keimah chuan min sawi khalh a nih hi :sad: Naupan lai chu nise, hetiang hi ‘Phungin ka sawi tur min sawi khalh’ ka ti ang :lol:
Kei zawng hetiang acrostic poem ziak tur hian ka thlung lu hi ka haitir peih lo thin. Zalen taka ka ngaihtuahna-a awm puanchhuah hian ka hahdam hawk zawk thin. Acrostic hi chu ka huphurh thin em avangin ka ti ngai lo, a rawn phuah peihte taimakna hi an ngaihsanawm ka ti khawp mai.
He lai tlar reuh hi :lol: :lol:
A tan Siamtu kutchhuak chhawrna awm lo,
Tumbu khaileng iangin a khaihil reng;
Hluihlawn nunna nei zingah a bang lo,
Tin, apostrophe/single quotation mark (‘) awm ho khi paih vek ka chak :smile:
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:44 am
Tha dap dap hle mai rhyme scheme mawi tak a inphum tel bok siii… mahse, a Thupui a Tu’nge…? tih laia hawrawp banna (apostrophe)dah lo khian word khi a famkim sa reng si a, apostrophe a awm hian Tuin nge..? emaw Tungnge..? emaw tihna a kawk daih si a, awm lo ta se… Tunge? tih khi a tawk mai lo’m ni? ka ti deuh… enge? ti lova engnge? tihzawk tur ang hian tunge? ti lova tungnge? tih kan hman ngai ka hre si lova…..
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October 12th, 2010 at 10:55 am
Nia sillyboy, he poem hi a namailo tlat. Acrostic poem a nih mai bakah Shakespearean sonnet nihphung rawn keng telin Iambic Pentameter hmanga phuah a la ni zui. Amaherawhchu, a rhythm lamah erawh chuan Mizotawng har zia a rawn lantir a, flow/rhythm dik tak erawh chu a zui kim hlei thei ta lo a nih hi.
MAHSE, hla tha tak a ni. Hriatthiam a awl a, a Mizo raih a, min tihlim bawk.
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October 12th, 2010 at 1:12 pm
‘Saw tu pu nge? Tu pu mah, ama tar’ tihna ang deuh a ni maw.
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