Ka Hêl Bîk Lo’ng Che

April 25th, 2011 5:00 pm by Tluanga Chawngthu

**Tleirawl/Rawlthar lai kutchhuak hian a hun laia kan rilru tam tak a pholang theia ka ngaih vang pawh ni miah lovin, prose lam post tur ka hriat mai loh avang zawkin, a hnuaia poem/poetry hi ka rawn thehchhuak leh tawp mai anih hi. Heti ang lama tûi mi lo tan chuan ninawm lamah pawh a kal ang tih a hlauhawm rum rum hial a. Mahse, mi{sual} nà ná nà han that viau thu awm suh!**

I sakhmel ka tawn hmasak ber ni khan,
Ka chhingmit hian khaw dang a hawi thei lo;
Thinlaiah i zun zam leng chuan min fan,
Nang lo chu tudang ka dâwn thei ta lo.

Ka dâwn lungruk biahthu hlân che ila,
Tleitir hmeltha, engtin min ngâi ang che?
Hmangaihna chauh chhüan tur ka nei si a,
I lung dum thei hian ka in ring lo ve.

“Min hmangaih em” tia ka zawh chein,
Lunglai natzualna min hlân ka hlau si;
Min hmangaih lêt phut che mah ilangin,
I tâwnah hian huaisen thiam har ka ti.

Lianchîa sakhmel iangin rualkhum ilang,
Tlâwm tak chuan ka hêl bik lo’ng che, thadang.

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40 Responses to “Ka Hêl Bîk Lo’ng Che”

  1. 1
    badboy Says:

    eheu :-D (H)

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  2. 2
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Lucklo deuh atangin kan comment tan dawn ni maw??..:-P

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  3. 3
    aduhi Says:

    kei zawng i thlukna hman dan mawlh hian min tibuai leh tawh!

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  4. 4
    zualbonez Says:

    nia

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  5. 5
    badboy Says:

    ka first a ka luck tih chu hriat mai ah.. chemtatrawta hi chu a rawn first ta lo chiah2 a a luck lo tih chu hriat mai :-D

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  6. 6
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Luck loh dan indawt asin…@boyhte…chuan, aduhi chu la naupang deuha siatthiam har a ti deuh a niang..

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  7. 7
    Mr. Sangte Says:

    Thadang han in tih teh thlawt hi chu an hrisel loh hmel e.. :-P

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  8. 8
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Sangte pa pawh chu a va Alej har leh tawh ve…kan thli khan a chhem fuh bik ngei mai che.. ;-)

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  9. 9
    Mr. Sangte Says:

    Ni e, thlukna hi i uar mah mah a nih hi. :-) Nge tawng pai tir vek min tum zawk? Ha ha ha

    chemtatrawta, Sangte kha kan lo ni miau sia lawm. :-P

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  10. 10
    aduhi Says:

    chuan a thupui a ‘hel’ hi mi va beisei a va hel nge ni a hei kan mi hmuh peihloh deuh te a sira kan hel ang hi?

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  11. 11
    vakul Says:

    Zualbonez i party-te hian Mamata-i hi an va hneh loh hmel ta ve, Mamata=i pawlte lah hi an rawva si a pakhat chuan a unaupa pawh talh leh hmiah tawh kha.

    Tluanga ka la OT lo nia. Tleirawl laia i phuah a nih chuan a tha khawp mai a. (Y) Ka’n phuah ve lawk lenglawng a nia aw,

    Beiseina nen an runsang ka pan
    Dahlawmaw tiin ka inhnem
    Maithei tihin min thlamuan, lamtluangah
    Mahna tih ka hmachhuan, Lungrun
    Ani ang tih chu a thamral leh mai thin.
    Ve se tiin ka innghat mahse,
    Duhthusam mai maw.

    Chhanna nem ngaiin ka rawn kai
    Aw tih biahnem nghakin ka beng ka dawh
    Lutuk tiin min chhang ta che
    Kei pawh tih a har viau em ni, Thapui
    Ka awih lo tih hian biahthu a pai thin.
    Ngei ngeiin a zui loh chuan ka ring lo
    Ni e ti kumtluang ang aw mahse
    Duhthusam mai maw-

    Hehe FIAMTHU. Lengzem a ni lo Lenglawng

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  12. 12
    Mr. Sangte Says:

    Aduhi, ka hnenah Mizo Tawng rawn zir ta che. A thupui a Hel a thlukna nen a dah khi chu ‘Vehthlem’ tihna lampang a ni e.

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  13. 13
    chemtatrawta Says:

    @aduhi, a awmzia chu approach tihna..niang..inla inno thei ropui,,, ;-)
    Sangtepa, che rang ila.. :-D

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  14. 14
    aduhi Says:

    ka sawisel peih viau naa i ziak thiam ka ti lutuk a nia

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  15. 15
    Mr. Sangte Says:

    Nia, ACT FAST a hun tawh. Aduhi, ACT FAST ang hmiang.. :-P chemtatrawta chu telh ve miahlo ang.

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  16. 16
    aduhi Says:

    lol tumaw inla inno? chemtatrawta hi mi?

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  17. 17
    zualbonez Says:

    vakul….PArty in thap fai nan a changa chaklok zeuh te pawh hi a tha…Mamata te reilo te lal chhungin kan lo in meditate tha ange

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  18. 18
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Sangte, kan president majualtean ‘che rang’tihin a kailek e.. Left lampang hi chuan mahni hnam thil hi kan ngaipawimawh a nia.. ;-)
    aduhi hi mawle, hel te hrethiam lo der vel…kan khilai sak dawn che mani.. :-P (D)

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  19. 19
    vakul Says:

    Zualbonez ka hmuh dan dik tak kan sawi ang. Hnam pui an nia an tih tawh chu an ti vak a. Hmanah Congress an lal reng a, an tha lo chung chung khan an dawh a.

    An nin tawpah CPM-in an thlak a, an dawh leh ngar ngar a, an ning leh tawh a TMC-ah rilru an pe leh a.

    Chumi dawt chu Congress a khan leh ber. An dawhthei a, mahse an thlak tawhte chu an dingchhuak leh tawh mang mang lo.

    Mizoram-hman ni lawka kan duh loh em em kan thlang lal leh nghal ang mai chu ni chiah lo deuh.

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  20. 20
    aduhi Says:

    enge meaning 2 a nei ve thei tlat alawm, approach leh avoid

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  21. 21
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Mamata-i pawh hi, a tihuih ang ringawt hi a ni lo, phakar thiam ve riau sin.. Nikum vel atanga a ministry hmalaka Bengal chhunga a beng luh tamzia ngaihtuah te chuan… :-)

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  22. 22
    vakul Says:

    tehreng tehreng. Hot/ short/ Bon Temper lutuk bawk si. A mite a hre lutuk, nepotism leh narcissism hi a tlakpui leh tur a ni mai. Dictator type. “i don’t need u any more” tihte hi a tawng duh dan mawle. Congress chance bawk a tha leh ang after Mamata.

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  23. 23
    chemtatrawta Says:

    Congress hi kan ram tan chuan an politics hi a la mawi ka ti ber mai.. Corruption avanga an buainate hi chu transparency an tih that vang ka ti lo thei lo..

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  24. 24
    keimah Says:

    Di Chambawihpuii hla nen a inzul deuh lo maw? lo ti ve ngawt ila… hre tam lo ve lutuk!

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  25. 25
    keimah Says:

    @vakul hla phuah khi a turu ru tlat!! (H)

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  26. 26
    semaj Says:

    hla thu ka hriat ve aw…a pawi mange mi tawna i hlui tur hi,tha val dang tawn ah i vul dawn si a…tu emaw tan aw

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  27. 27
    CFL Says:

    Kei zawng vawiin-ah ka bawihtei’n thenna biahthu mi hlan a, hetiang lamah chuan ka hul lai tak a ni. Khua hmun loh zawng a lo pawi thei ngei e.
    ” Tlaini liam tur sen riai ka suihlung min len e,
    Ka thlir ngam dawn nem maw then hnu D zun ngaiin;
    Nang ka hriatrengna ten zamual an liam hma loh chuan,
    Ka au zel dawn che ka hmangaihna zahpui hian ka mawi si lo.

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  28. 28
    chawnghilh Says:

    Hmelthat lama inlem hi a tihchi rei vak lo … chhe phiai phuai, thiamna sang tak tak te hian min luahluan leh nge nge zel.

    Chuvangin, hmelchhe thiltihtheihna tha ber chu thiamna sang leh thiamna hmantlak neih hi a ni … tuk tin zan tina chaw kilpui atan chuan hmeltha nge nge chu an iai-awm loh deuh zawk bawk a: :-) chu chu mi inzir-vengvate hian an hre khiau tawh …

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  29. 29
    hrmizo Says:

    Huiham!!!! i thlukna dah dan leh dahna chu leh chu leh! siamchawp thiam hle mai

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  30. 30
    kiddo Says:

    that ve mai mai hi a… (Y)

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  31. 31
    chemtatrawta Says:

    CFL.. (D) ..cheer up..a aia thra i la tawng dawn tihna

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  32. 32
    zualbonez Says:

    CFL…paracetomol mum 10 vel hmawm rawh,,,i luak a chhuak bur mai ang :-D

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  33. 33
    chemtatrawta Says:

    kan chet ran pui dawn me, CFL hi..majualte

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  34. 34
    Fugitive Says:

    vowel pahnih a inzawm chuan thlukna an dah ngai lo tiin high school kan kal laia kan Mizo zirtirtu in a sawi thin.

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  35. 35
    CFL Says:

    @31 Chtr, ni e tiraw.
    @32 zualbonez, he he, luak chu a chhuak khawp ang le.

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  36. 36
    aduhi Says:

    #34 Fugitive kha kha keipawh hmanni ah ka lo rakpui tawh.

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  37. 37
    triplestar Says:

    Tleitir hmeltha, engtin min ngâi ang che?’
    tih aiah hian ‘Tleitir hmeltha, engtin min ngâi che maw?’ han ti hanp ta mai la, nagaihno a bei deuh zawng law’ng maw aw te ka lo ti mai mai a..

    A ni tak a sin, tleirawl/rawlthar lai kha chuan kan hmuh chak em em te pawh kha kan han hmuh chiah khan kan lai leh trut thin a, han awm fal ila sawi tur reng reng kan hre leh si lo thin anih kha maw :-P

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  38. 38
    triplestar Says:

    Ka thil type teh nuaih chu, ka edit thei miah lo lehnghal, ka hmanhmawh lutuk a lawm mawle :-$

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  39. 39
    muantea Says:

    @triplestar, i sawi ang khian ziak se a rhymme scheme a buai vek dawn asin :-)

    Tluangrhymme-a hi i phuah tha thei khawp mai, han ti zel teh.Sonnet type-in i ziak thin bawk sia, a chang then lo khian sonnet kalphung angin rawn rem thin la a tha lehzual ang.

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  40. 40
    triplestar Says:

    @muantea, a lo nih khi, a end rhyme khi ka lo en miah lo a-b a-b (Y)

    Ka inhnuk dawk leh e :-$

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