TAWN THAR ‘D’

November 5th, 2010 1:00 am by matea_tmj

Dai ngai loh thiamna runin belin,
Kan kai e zaleng nau a lian a te;
Chutin ka lo tawng che, khuavang lasi;
Tihian ka dawn che am ka thai changa’n,
Biahthu ka hlan ta che min chhan ve nan,
Rualtha thu mai zawng ka awih ngam si lo;
Nang ngei min hlan la min duhthu,
Vanhnuai hringfa hlim ber ka lo nih theih nan.

Thil engkim hi i hriat ve ka duh tlat;
Hmachhuan tur ka neilo ka tih tawh kha,
Rosum zawnga min teh i tum tlat chuan,
Ka tling ngailo ang keizawng ka hniam hrat;
Mahse heti bakberh chung chung pawh hian,
I rin ai chuan ka hmangaih phian ang che.

Note:  Hla ani nachungin sakloh chi, (Sonnet) huanga mi a ni a. Alo chhuahna chiah hi  hriatchian a har a. Italian Sonnet” dungzuia phuah a ni. Kum zabi 13-na hunlai vela Italy rama an chhin chhuah a ni a, kutziak lehkhabua kan hmuh angin a zai kungpui Petrarcha’n tuna anihphung ang tura alo chulmam hi a ni.

Tlar 14 a sei, tlar khat a thulam 10 zel awm, ABBA,CDE-a rhyme a ni. A hlawm hmasa tlar 8 hi Octave(Octet) an ti a, a thlur 2-na tlar 6 hi Sestet anti ve thung a ni. Octave-a kan thupui kheuh hawn hi Sestet-ah hian a vawrtawp thlenpui a ni. Kan hmangaih kan tawng hi (ti ve khanglang ila) “ Stress leh Stress” lova innghat lova, tonal languages a nih zawk avangin he hla hi “ Metrical verse” ni lovin “ Syllabic verse” a ni e. Chhiartu ten in hriatthiam ka van duh tak em!!!!

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24 Responses to “TAWN THAR ‘D’”

  1. 1
    zeus Says:

    FIRST nih hi D tawn tum tan chuan a pawimawh khawp mai..
    Lengdangin an First khalh dah che chuan..

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  2. 2
    zeus Says:

    Tawn thar D i duh chuan Second mawlh suh ang che

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  3. 3
    zeus Says:

    third leh lek phei chu ka unau…

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  4. 4
    Lalbuaia Says:

    va phuah nalh thiam ve o.

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  5. 5
    zeus Says:

    phuah thiam khawp mai!

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  6. 6
    D_auachwgthu Says:

    First…. lo chiang lehpek ngei mai le…. chhiar phawt teh ang. 8)

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  7. 7
    D_auachwgthu Says:

    Zeus….em em a che…. mi kian ve rawh, second class tal ….hehheheheh :lol:

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  8. 8
    shylo Says:

    I rin aiin nalh ka tih sak phian ang che… :P Zawhna pakhat: Rhyme ABBA, CDE han tih vel tak hi ka bagbo rei tawh em mai, enge min hrilhfiah theih em? A thu hi tha kan ti ve ringawta, a ‘rhyme’ an tih a, an ziak chiah hian a awmzia tur ka hre thiam tlatlo.A hria khan han sawifiah deuh teh u…

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  9. 9
    zeus Says:

    @D_au in mu vek tawh ang chu ka lo ti zawka, kan kep law law che u anih kha :)
    i nick hi a topic nen a inhmeh riau mai! D han au tak tak la mole :D

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  10. 10
    zeus Says:

    @shylo tlar tin ah khia a thu tawp ber khi chiang takin han lam fuk fuk la, I hrethiam mai ang

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  11. 11
    zeus Says:

    eg- *’belin’ leh ‘changan”
    *te’ leh ‘che’ khi a rhyme a hence ABBA

    ka hriatthiam ve dan ania.. diklo maithei/dik maithei :D

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  12. 12
    Ozima Says:

    Hla hi a len dan dan in an phuah mai emaw ka lo ti a, kei hrethiam velo tan chuan octet, sonnet, abba, tih vel insawi hian ka lunglen a hnawt tiau vek. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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  13. 13
    H.Vangchhia Says:

    Tawnthar di aw lungrunpui,
    I mawi chuang mange
    Zaleng hei zawng zingah hian…. tra la la la la

    Shakespeare’s Sonnet XVIII min ti hrechhuak tlats :D

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  14. 14
    H.Vangchhia Says:

    Italian sonnet i tih kha ‘Petrarchan sonnet’ a ni thei mai em aw?

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  15. 15
    Ku Muanga Says:

    College kan kal lai chuan kan thianpa hian “abba abba cde cde” rhyme scheme hi “abba abba chhe dei chhe dei..” a ti thin. :lol: Shakespeare’s Sonnet leh Elizabethan Sonnet danglamna kan buaipui laih laih thin laite kha hmanlai an chang zo ta… :roll:

    Mahse Arts ka la ngai lo thung. :twisted:

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  16. 16
    littlerascal Says:

    I phuah thiam khawp mai :-)

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  17. 17
    chawnghilh Says:

    Arts lak loh paw’n, Fings lak tur, at hle loh hi a pawimawh! Miltonian hi a dang hret a, Elizabethan leh Shakespearian chu a inzul deuh lo maw?

    Vawiin chu dam tein Hmuifang lam a ni dawn a, poetic photography lam kan rawn uar ve mai thei a nia! A romantic veu veu viau mai thei. Municipality hi a ninawm a, country-side lamah kan intheh-trhil teh poh a niang chu!

    “Saipui kal lai” tih kha HATHI ni lovin, GANESH a lo ni zawk an ti, Bawnghnute pek a ngai khawp! “Ui tang rual” bauh thawm a na em mai, khawpui tlanchhiatsan a ngai! :lol: :oops: :twisted: :roll:

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  18. 18
    coolsoul09 Says:

    @matea-tmj : I phuahthiam hle mai. Ngaimawh tlem ka nei a. I lo bihchiang dawn nia.

    1)’runin’ tih khi..a fuh meuh lo. I hriat angin ‘run’ chu ‘in’ tihna a ni.
    2) ‘ a lian a te’ tih khi a ulh khawp mai bawk, a flow a tibuai.
    3)’Nang ngei min hlan la min duh thu’ Poetic License hi sawi fo mah ila, thu awmze nei lo leh kalhkim lo hman hi a fuh ber em?

    Mizo tawnga hlachham-mi kan phuah hian, saptawng anga tawng hausa a nih ve loh avangin, rhyme hram hram kan tum vang leh a syllable inantir kan tum vang hian, hla chhiar nuam leh flow tha tak tur pawh, hla ho mai mai ‘not-so-memorable’-ah kan chhuah thin a. Hei pawh hi chutiang zingah chuan a telin ka hria. NOI.:)

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  19. 19
    michelin Says:

    van phuah nalh eeee…….vanglai ngaihawm leh dawn lawm male…he9

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  20. 20
    matea_tmj Says:

    #18.. nia diklo lai awm zeuh2 maithei, ka rawn maupuah ve phawng2 anih khi.. siamrem ngailai han siamrem zung2 mai teh un…i sawi khi8 a dik e.
    Rûn tih tur a ni e, chuan typeing mistake a awm hlauh anih kha. sorry :D

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  21. 21
    loneeagle26016 Says:

    I thil zir i ron hmang tangkai hle mai a ! Mizo tawnga Sonnet phuahte hi chu a tin pawha ka lo tinchhin ngai hauh loh thil ania ! Literature hi ka zir ve nuala,Poetry hi ka tui lohna zu ni tlata ! Tun ami khi Petrarchan sonnet maw! Metaphysical Poem lamte hi ron bei teh, mizo tawng hian a ngaihnawm duh phian long maw ?

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  22. 22
    Maisek Says:

    A that reuh hi le! Han ti zel teh khai!

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  23. 23
    malsta27 Says:

    HOHOhO………….va tha ve……..shelley hi ka hriat ve chhun a nia han ti chhin teh a, twist awm in lo ti ve ngot teh ang. Nalh khop mai……..

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  24. 24
    matea_tmj Says:

    kei a kara ka post min fak derna avangin ka lawm e.

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