Lenlai lungduh rual zawng chhing in
Amten duhthu zai a chawi in
In di fanau lungduh chawi an
Tinkim Kan sam Kumtluang lendun
Uai a chual hian ka phal ne maw
Lungmawl rawllai thu di zawng nen
Lam ang let ni kan tiam tawn nan
Engtin lunglen tuar ang i maw
Nang tawnloh nan kumsul a rei
Mual lam a hla aw kan tuan na
Awmkhua a har lunglen a na
I tawn an engtin tuar i maw….
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hairehai 
October 6th, 2010 at 1:53 am
va phuah thiam ve.Chhiar a manhla e.
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October 6th, 2010 at 1:54 am
In nu chu i ngai ve hle mai maw.
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October 6th, 2010 at 1:55 am
strike 3…i poem rawn chhawpchhuah hi tawi mah2 nih hi mawle,i sawi tum chu i sawi fel viau chuan a hriat bawk sia.Phuah thiam hle mai.
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October 6th, 2010 at 2:09 am
strike three you’re out…….
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October 6th, 2010 at 4:48 am
“Nang tawnloh nan kumsul a rei” hi a tluangtlam zan lo mange?
Kumsul hi a vei/liam thin a, Kumsul liam/vei kan hmang dawn a nih chuan nun hlui lam sawi nan kan hmang tlangpui!
Kumsul vei ai chuan khua rei hmang ta zawk la te ka ti ve mai mai!
“Nang tawn loh nan khua reng a rei ” emaw han ti zawk la, a tluang deuh ang.
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October 6th, 2010 at 6:40 am
A va tha ve! Tawi si awmze nei si a nih hi. A flow a dik khawp mai.
‘Uaia chual hian ka phal ne maw’ tih khi chhut sual palh liau liau a nih ka ring a,
-Uaia chul hian ka phal nem maw- tiin ka chhiar tho tho e.
@lushai, i rawt ang khi nise a phuahtu rilru a plot awm (ka rin dan) a dang dawn asin. Chu bakah a sawi ang khian ‘kum khat chhung zet inhmuh loh chu rei a ti ngar ngar hle a ni’. ‘khua reng a rei’ tih ngawt chu a general deuhva a hmang duh lo a niang. Tin, a rilru atanga a lan danh ‘kum khat (kum sul) hian awmzia a nei a ni ngei bawk ang.
Ka sawi duh zawk chu a tlartinah hian rhymme scheme mumal siam i tum lem lo niin a lang a, chuvangin a tawp a ‘n’ lam ngai zing lutuk hian a flow a ti monotonous tep a ni.
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October 6th, 2010 at 6:41 am
Sorry
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October 6th, 2010 at 6:42 am
muantea chu tha i ti ngang aniang, vawi2 2 comment nawn tak chu hairehai
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October 6th, 2010 at 6:48 am
HV, ka edit daih :lol: phone atang hi chuan chet sual a awl ve riau.
Khawnge….ka’n tho ve tawh ang e. Good Morning misual ho!!
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October 6th, 2010 at 6:56 am
Chhut sual tel lo khian a tha viau e.
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October 6th, 2010 at 8:24 am
Lèn lai lungduh rual zawng chhîngin
Amte’n duhthu zaia chawiin
Indî fanau lungduh chawia’n
Tin kim kan sàm ‘kumtluang lèn dun’
Uaia chul hian ka phal nè’maw
Lung màwl ‘ràwl lai thu dî zàwng nèn!
Lâm ang lèt nî kan tiam tawn nân
Engtin lunglèn tuar ang imaw?
Nang tawn loh nân kumsùl a rei
Mual lam a hlâ, Aw! kan tuanna
Awmkhua a har, lunglèn a nâ!
I tàwna’n engtin tuar imaw!
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October 6th, 2010 at 8:26 am
A tawi aiin a fun tam reuh…Mahse ka thaw a chham tep alawm maw le.
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October 6th, 2010 at 9:50 am
A phuahtu rilru tur ka dawn thiam pui nghal e chu ka ti felfai thah ngam lo nangin, ka chhut thiam pui e. huizzzz. a tha in chhiar a nuam hle mai. A dang han theh chhuak zel teh
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October 6th, 2010 at 5:41 pm
a post tupa chu i sas nen in in brk lai a ni maw. .hehe
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October 6th, 2010 at 8:14 pm
#14 min hmu mi? he3
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March 31st, 2011 at 10:04 am
Lèn lai lungduh rual zawng chhîngin
Amte’n duhthu zaia chawiin
Indî fanau lungduh chawia’n
Tin kim kan sàm ‘kumtluang lèn dun’
Uaia chul hian ka phal nè’maw
Annem biahthu kan hlan zawng kha
Lung màwl ‘ràwl lai thu dî zàwng nèn!
Lâm ang lèt nî kan tiam tawn nân
Engtin lunglèn tuar ang imaw?
Nang tawn loh nân kumsùl a rei
Mual lam a hlâ, Aw! kan tuanna
Awmkhua a har, lunglèn a nâ!
I tàwna’n engtin tuar imaw!
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March 31st, 2011 at 10:09 am
a mi tawnah i ti phut a…
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