Nang ngaih a zual chang hian sirvaah chang dawn ila!
Lunglen remin sirva chitin rengah chang dawn ila’ng.
kawlah ni lo chhuak se Kawlvaah ka chang mai awm e.
Ngambawmpar leh tuangtuah par vul lai ngei an.
Kumsul mah lo vei se lunglen a dam awm chuang si lo.
Nemtui lo kam se, sikni kawlan a lo her leh anga.
Lailenteah ka chang nange nang ngai luat vang hian e.
Ruamtin hrutin Lung tin suang ka zai vawr nan.
Chutin khuafur lo her in sirva ten hraichawi thlei se.
Kei ka suihlunglen thlei ni reng ka nei chuang hlei lo’nge.
Huivaah changin chulhnu bukthlam ka nghak mai tange.
I rauthla leng suihlung ka tawng dah law maw.
Theih se Kawlhawk mualliaman ka chang mai tur lunglen nen.
sang ah lengin, leng der der in thlang zamual liam ila.
Hnutiang chhawn ila hringchan leh nangngaih suihlunglen hi.
Aw ka phal theilo kha zawng sul ang kan zui….
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June 3rd, 2012 at 9:00 pm
ting tingz
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:06 pm
lung a va ti leng vawng vawng em 😉
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:11 pm
paws tupa, nang ngai reng reng hian zan mu ka meng lo a sin 😛
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:14 pm
I submit hmain i chhiar nawn leh lo a nih hi mawle.
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:15 pm
ngambawm par nge tuangtuah par hi mawi joke le 😀
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:22 pm
(Y)
“Ruamtin hrutin Lung tin suang ka zai vawr nan” tih hi ka va’n hrethiam chiahlo e 😀
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:28 pm
(Y)
Cháng tàwpna tlar hnihna leh tlar lìna hi a mümal lo deuh hlek a ang.
Cháng tàwp ber bawk, tlar khatna, Theih chang se kawlhawk mualliaman ka chang mai tùr… han tih hi a awmzia tak hriatthiam a har ka ti deuh hlek. Hlathüah ‘kawlhawk’ hi ‘kawlhawk mualliam’ an ti niin ka hre lo va, Lalmama (?) hla pakhatah khan ‘kawlhawk mualliam’ chanchin a sawi mai niin ka hria, Mizoram aṭanga kawlhawk a bo zawh mék avangin.
Mahsé hla phuahtute kam zalenna (licentia poetica? 😉 ) i hmang te pawh a ni thei bawk.
A ṭha ka ti khawp mai, a hla pumpui chu.
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:31 pm
Aw chu khawpui mawi thlen hlan ka nghakhlel
Sirva ianga pakak pakak tiin
A englekhawle nang ngaih banzai rel a har si thin
Tuangtuah par ianga duhawm leh mawi
Ka nghilh lawng che ???
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:33 pm
# (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:44 pm
Chhiar a har lek lek a ni. Mahse, ka thiam ve su lo va, good post (Y) pe mai ang 😛
June 3rd, 2012 at 9:55 pm
Ziah zawm tur chungchangah tlem sêl tur a awm tih mai lohah chuan a thu a ril tha dap dap hle mai.
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:02 pm
engti hawi zawnga comment tur nge 😛
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:07 pm
lungleng mood a kawmen tur @ sisen 😛
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:17 pm
A thu chu a tha viau nachungin critic lawk teh ang. Rhyme a awm lo a, ziah zawm leh zawm loh tur a dik lo nual a, a thu thenkhatte hi chu awmze bo tep tepin i chhep a, “chutin” tih hi zosapte khan an hmang thin a, a tulna a awm vak lova, dik lo tak takah pawh kan hmang ta zel a, a pawi khawp mai.
Post tha tak zawng a ni e
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:22 pm
khartung sawn zelin…. ;-(
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:24 pm
ka va’n thiam tlem eeeee :-$ (K)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:29 pm
#17 (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:31 pm
Tsa hi bel a va’n kai har em em! :-O
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:35 pm
he post a lo irchhuahna hi a ril khawp mai 🙂
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:35 pm
sial ang kan mu dawn teh ang, zingah hma tawkah dar ang thawh a ngai si 😛 thiam ve fu lo maw @sisen
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:40 pm
chhingmit kharin, laikhum belin
tawnmangah sensiari nen leng dunin,
hlimlai par tlan, nui hiauva lengin,
tudang ngai lova a thiang te-in,
laikhum belin tlu leh ruah teh ang : :-O 😀 😛
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:41 pm
@21 mega (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:42 pm
@22 sega (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:45 pm
Aw thirban, aw thirban,
Hringmi leng zawng tan i va pawimawh em!
I zarah zan khawthim pawh chhun eng ang mai a chang,
Ka tan ‘Hmangaihna par mawi’ min hmuhtirtu,
Thirban phena bihruk hmangaihna ngei chu 😛 😉
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:46 pm
nang tawn nan city bus in ka rawn ride,
i saloon chak tawkin ka rawn kal pel fua…
i telephone you from the bus phen.. 😛 😛 😛
mu daih teh ang ka nawi tan tlat 😉
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:48 pm
25 (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:50 pm
@26 (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:52 pm
An sawi facebook tlangin an sel e,
Kei erawh sel thei hian ka mawi lo
Darfeng lumum, hawktui a nunchan zir thin hian,
Ka tawng e, lungdumtu
Aw Facebook, aw Lawi Lo,
(L) (L) (L)
June 3rd, 2012 at 10:56 pm
suang tih hi lung tihna tho chu a ni a, hlathuah sunglungpui tih hi an hmang fo thin..tuna hman dan hi a tha lo tihna lam ai mahin ruamtin hruta lungpui chunga a fu turin Lailen a chan a ni tlat a..Lailen hi chu phulah an awm ber, ruam leh lungpui chung hi an bel ngai lo..chinrangah chang zawk ta lah..
ngambawm leh tuangtuahpar vul lai khera kawlhawka chan i duh hi a intu lo deuhin miten an hre thei…he thing pahnih hi leh kawlhawk hian inzawmna an nei tlem..an tlan ve ngai lo va..mahse i lunglenna lam thuah i sawiah ngai ang.
sirvaten an hraichawi thlei i tih hi thlei hi chhaih ..fiam…duat tih sawinan i hmang a nih chuan a dawta thlei o hmanna hi i thlang fuh ka ti thei lo…mizo tlar thum zaiah khan…hawh rawh thiani mual li liai tlang khanthuamah a thleiin lunglen i thlei dun ang..tih kha a awm a, kha kha parralel pui i tum a nih chuan a hmaa i hmanna nena i sawi zawm fuh lo.
i phuah dan style hi tha ka ti a, ka tawng khawp lo deuhin ka hria..han ti zel teh.
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:00 pm
Hla ni maw, sak chi nge chham chi nge. A thu chu tha
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:04 pm
Tawngkam i thiam e, i thu hman te pawh tunlai atan chuan a ‘un’ tha khawp mai. Mizo poetry ti hausa turin hma han la zel teh . Mahse a tawp ber tlar khi tilo zawk khian han ti ta la aw ka ti…ka tih awmzia chu, hnutiang chu han chhawn law law mai la a tawp ber tlara han phallo leh hnuhnawh lo khian…awmzia a awm tawhloh hnuah inlak khawngaihthlak (i tum) leh khi a fuh chiahlo hehe. I phuah leh hun chu a nih nih ni tlang ngam tawp tawh rawh aw 🙂
PS: Kawlhawk mualliama’n tih khi a tha lutuk aw, metaphor common lo tak a ni.
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:05 pm
skill leh scheme ka hmu lo. Hla uang a ang. Post i vil hman hunah ka point out keuh2 ang.
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:16 pm
vakul: a thlei chuan lunglen a fai thei lo, haw rawh thiani tlang li liai khan thuam an a thapin lunglen i thap dun ang.. I va ti lunglenthlak reuh e.
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:24 pm
Mizo poetry ah chuan skill leh scheme hi a pawimawh ber lo, thu ngaihnobei , thu inkailawn tha, khaikhin dan mawi pangngai leh tawngkam bungrua ulh lutuk lo, chulmam ve pangngai leh hriatthiam theih thuril, chher chawp leh chawplo pawh mizo nun nena inmil hman a pawimawh ber ka ti.
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:35 pm
Kei chu a herh lek lekin ka hria @Charice. Han lam kal a har deuh tlat. A next post ah chuan hei aia chhiar nuam a nih ka beisei (Y)
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:39 pm
Lungtin suang tih khi…, ‘suang’ tih tak khi enge a awmzia min lo hrilh ve teh u? post tu pa a awm silova 😀
June 3rd, 2012 at 11:49 pm
Hla pawh chu in va phuah thiam hlawm ve mawle… 😀
June 4th, 2012 at 12:01 am
free verse leh blank verse hi chu kan ngah fu, form dangah hian kan pachhe em a ni. Thahnem ka ngai khawp mai. Misual a poetry post ho hi ka fuih in, ka chalenge nasa thin.. Ka hlawhtling ve zauh2, an tam lem hlei lova..
Mizotawng hi tonal a nih avangin eye rhyme ngawt hi a dik ve thei si lova, metre dawnin stress leh stres lo awmzia awm bawk si lo..a har a nia, mahse thangthar ho hian an thiam khawp mai. Thluak han hmang tak tak teh u.
June 4th, 2012 at 12:01 am
khawpuia i in ti ringot mai ah hriat che i hlau deuh nge ni………….A thu hriat thiam loh ka nei nual mai, mahni’n a thiam loh pawn a mawina lo zawm ve tal hi ka tum thin…….. (Y) (Y)
June 4th, 2012 at 12:11 am
#40 (Y)
June 4th, 2012 at 12:20 am
mizotawngah hi chuan end rhyme aiin internal rhyme hi uar ila a mawiin ka hria…khamawin….v.thangzama
ka lenrual lungduhte u, phang loten i pen ang u.
ram riangte a kan kurpui, hmatiang sawna kan tulpui.
ram kalsiam thuang a zau e, pheikhai chheh reng a zang e.
kan luah ngei dawn e pen ru, raltiang……rel ang u.
he hla post hi chu a lo lan danin a ziak a, a ma mimal lunglenna ngau ngau a chham a, a poetical value a sang lo. ka sawi awmzia chu thil nihna a hriat danin a sawi a, a ma lamah chiang mahse midang tan a chiang lo thei…a ril anga a lanna lai apiang hi belhchet dawl lo lai a ni deuh…chuvang chuan sammoo-a pawn hla uang emaw a ti hial…a rawn ti leh anga fel thlup mai ang.
June 4th, 2012 at 12:34 am
a chunglam chu ka thiantha tak tak te vek an nawi a ni maw.,thanks!!
thiam loh tawh nak alaiin hla uang ka han post ve a nih hi..min han hrilh belh zel teh u…thu ka awih teh mai a nia..
#39 khawpuia hi ka hming a nia..
@saint, ka beng ka dawh e.. (Y)
June 4th, 2012 at 12:42 am
Saint sammoo, hei hi enge i ngaihdan nia’g aw te ka tia, muttheihloh vang mai mai ka phuah chu ania, chawtak khukpui vak chi pawh a ni hlei law.. 😀
Zantiang reh hei ang laikhum belh chu,
Chhingmit meng thinlai nau ang tleilo,
Dawn ruai ka awl nunhlui liam hnu.
Chutin hai ang thang lai’an ka phang,
Zingtian awi maw her takngial dawn e,
Tawnmang lamtluang chhui rel ta’ng.
Mahse luahtu tam ngei lairil thlunglu,
Dawhrem belh laiin chawi nem theilo,
Tlai pawh lo var i, min dem lo u. (H)
June 4th, 2012 at 1:40 am
Nang ngaih zual chang hian;
Sirva ah chang dawn i la,
Tlai khua a lo thim dawn hian,
In runsang lo kai ta i la.
Nang ngaih zual chang hian;
Duh ai sam ta i la,
Ka lenna mual atang hian,
Rawn leng ta i la.
Nangngaih zual chang hian;
VaiVa ah chang i la,
Mual za kar dan tang hian,
I tangnem bel ta i la…
Lei van ram tlafual a chang ngei ang 😛
June 4th, 2012 at 2:08 am
Va un rem2 ve :-O
#44 Vaiva (Y) 🙂
June 4th, 2012 at 9:48 am
ka tho chiah, charice a mawi top. (nalh hmang lovin mawi ka’n hmang lui a nìh hi)
June 4th, 2012 at 10:00 am
(Y)
Misual thenkhatin an sawi tawh tho na’ngin, hlathu te hi chu sipel leh punctuation uluk lehzual ni se… 😉
June 4th, 2012 at 11:05 am
Nau ang kan chhiar chhuah chu,
Comment zawng nen;
Ka rawn hlan e ka comment tlawm,
Ar ang lo lawi nang che,
Nui hiau in.
😉 😛 😀
tren tren
June 4th, 2012 at 12:15 pm
Piancham chibai, paws tu pa
June 4th, 2012 at 3:48 pm
#50 (Y)
June 4th, 2012 at 4:33 pm
I phuahthiam hle mai.
June 4th, 2012 at 5:00 pm
kawlhawk sava hi ka fu lai kala hmu miah lo! a thlawla mual tawpah a liam sia ka han hmang thla ve ngawt a ni e@houdini
suang hi lung tihna tho a ni sia, lam a tih nawmphah takin ka ti deuh. kawlva ka tih hi kawlhawk ka sawina a ni lo, Kawlva
ngambawk leh fartuahpar tlan thin zawk ka sawina a ni e. “thlei” e.g – arpui in a note a thlei. a note te kha mahni a khawsa
ve tawh tur in a kalsan ka tihna a ni e. ‘fiam, duat tih na chu a ni thei dawn a mi a tlarhnuai chiah en hian.end rhyme
chungchang hi adik ka ti khawp mai. ka lawm ltk e @vakul
June 4th, 2012 at 5:14 pm
@awmtea,
Rhyme hi chu sap ho tihdan a ni deuh in ka hria a, mizo tawngah chuan a pawimawh ber tur ah ka ngai lem lo.kan tawngkam ngah tawk loh vang nge, mizo hla hi chu a inla lawm sa hrim2in ka hria.
June 4th, 2012 at 5:29 pm
a flow hrim2 hi ka duhthu a sam lo deuh. A mam lo. A ri lo (hmm..hm..hmmm..) pawn chhiar la a mawi tur a ni. Ri sâng, khamphei, hniam.. in luhthelh in ri (wave) a siam kha zotawng hre lo tan pawh rimawi a tling thei. Han tang sauh2 teh. Tlar 2 lek in rhyme tir tum leh tlar 1 a ri in zul 2 tal dah tuma ka tlaivar lek2 chang a tam mai.. Ti zel rawh.
June 4th, 2012 at 6:57 pm
# 29 & 41 Vakul, #52 Khawpuia, ‘thlei’ tih hi chu i hman dàn ve hrim hrim pawh ni lovin, Mizo ṭawngkam ve rëng a ni, tiin ka rawn thláwp ve a che (@Khawpuia).
Arpui hian a notë a thlei ṭhin, nu erawh chuan a fa hnute hne lai a englo (ka hre tawh lo
, hnute a ngheitír a ni tawp mai. Chaw hraiin a vehthlèm ṭhin bawk.)